B R E a T H L E S S - the Cinquain Style

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~Breathless~ ( The American Cinquain Style ) You are So beautiful to me In your eyes I see love Moon, stars, in the warmth of your love I'm breathless. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2016 March.13.2017 “Kindness is a language which the deaf can hear and the blind can see.” - Mark Twain- ~ Author's Notes: The "American Cinquain " is a poetry style created in 2010, by Dorian Petersen Potter, aka ladydp2000. My Cinquain version( The American Cinquain Style) goes by word counting, and not by syllable counting)

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/13/2017 2:57:00 PM

- Beautifully written, Dorian - A 7 to you from me - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 3/14/2017 4:46:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly, Anne-Lise , for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem:)Deeply appreciate it all dear friend.So glad you that liked this very romantic, love poem here.And thanks for the 7! I wish you all the best in everything too!:)Sending you always my love n' prayers:)Wishing you a very lovely week!In his light God bless you always!:))Hugs!D