B Horror On a Beach Day.

Soon the curious swelled to a mob.
as they gathered to gape at the glob.
Someone prods with a stick.
as another screams: " Quick!"
"We must run for our lives! It's the Blob!"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 8:12 AM
Congratulations Gerard on your well deserved win in Susan Mill's contest "Jellyfish at the Beach". Love, Carol
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July 18, 2010 at 8:10 AM
Many congratulations Gerard on your win in Susan's fine contest >> James
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July 13, 2010 at 4:56 PM
Big congrats, Gerard! Love this limerick. Best wishes, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 3:32 PM
Congrats Gerard on your winning poem in the Jellyfish contest with this wonderful and interesting write.. so fun to read u my friend.. enjoy another biggie.. with luv..
Sweetheart Avatar
July 11, 2010 at 8:32 PM
This is too cute Gerard.. good luck in the jellyfish contest..don't know what u are referring to in your comment.. as far as the website.. don't have one yet but seriously working on one .. u must have red my mind..haha.. we got to see so many sights.. by the time we go through all the photos between the two trips there will be hundreds.. and going to Italy in August.. more photos.. so its all good .. life is wonderful.. with luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 10, 2010 at 9:22 AM
Good one, and yes, you got the title exactly right!!
A   Avatar
July 9, 2010 at 4:16 PM
Funny one,, enjoyed this one ...P.D.
Dietrich Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 10:50 PM
Yes, is it for that contest like Carolyn asks here? What a great way to approach that topic if it was for the jellyfish contest! way to go. Andrea ps Thanks for your sweet comments today.
Devonshire Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 7:14 PM
Great limerick, Gerard! Love it! Is this for the jellyfish contest? It would do well. Love,Carolyn
Conway Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 3:17 PM
Wonderful Limerick-I've had my own encounters with those horrible Blobs, they aren't fun! Good luck in the contest!~Tirzah~
Kelly Avatar
July 8, 2010 at 9:21 AM
Witty piece , GK Jr. as ever . Sometimes , " life's a beach " . You have put me right off my Jelly !!! ....
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