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unrhymed quatrains 

Away With the Fairies

In a moment 
of sweet surrender 
promises are made 
uniquely rare

Drifting away 
into dreams 
held under the aroma 
of hawthorn blossoms

Opening gates 
unto a Kingdom
jewels sing 
star spangled speechless 

Under rainbows 
each a porthole of illumination 
through the sun shines 
a pot of gold priceless 

Butterflies hover upon beams of light transmitting signals 
dancing on every second skipping beat 
Breathless roses waltz onto each breath of air
steeped in the sweetest scent of Heaven
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016


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Date: 3/26/2016 9:07:00 PM
Excellent poem Liam
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Date: 3/20/2016 9:05:00 PM
I have been so enthralled by this write...excellent Liam...this poem deserves to be placed among the best !!!!!!7/7
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Date: 3/16/2016 6:05:00 PM
Beautiful!, I love 'under rainbows each a porthole of illuminatio'. Roses are holy flowers I love!, 'Breathless roses waltz onto each breath of air steeped in the sweetest scent of Heaven'. Kim believbn
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Date: 3/16/2016 3:07:00 PM
- Soft and delicious, my friend Liam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/16/2016 3:02:00 PM
Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love poem,you've written here my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful, sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!Amazing!Very wonderful style!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In His light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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