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Poetry/Rhyme/Away In A Pet Shop
Copyright Protected, ID 07-1561-938-15
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, July 15, 2023
For the International Contest, Away in  Manger Contest Re-Run
Sponsor, Jan Allison, Judged, 07/31/2023

First Place

Free Vectors | Calico cat

"And God said, I will send them without wings so no one suspects they are angels." _God Away in a pet shop, no place for a cat; in a cage looking sad, just laying all flat ! A calico orphan, I could not leave her; so, I bought the sweet girl, with the pretty fur ! She was a good kitten, so playful and fun; she passed at two years old, my heart she had won ! I think of her often, way up in Heaven; hope she is in God's arms, for this past seven ! The years go on and on, I will not forget; my calico angel, for God sent this pet !

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Date: 7/31/2023 7:47:00 PM
Sweet and sad. Beautifully written, Constance! Congrats on your top win! Blessings, Kim M
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Date: 8/1/2023 6:53:00 AM
Kim, thank you so much for your compassion, compliment and congrats, blessings !
Date: 7/31/2023 7:30:00 PM
"God sent this pet" - very beautifully said. Congratulations!
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Date: 8/1/2023 6:52:00 AM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, blessings !
Date: 7/31/2023 11:50:00 AM
Losing a pet is a horrid, heart wrenching thing, Constance. Nice that you’ve immortalised yours right here on Soup. Congrats on your win. Terry
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Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2023 1:51:00 PM
Terry, thank you so much for the compassion, compliment and congrats. Losing Peanut at such a young age was so shattering, she just died suddenly, it was heartbreaking, blessings!
Date: 7/31/2023 11:37:00 AM
Love this Constance, though I’m sorry for your loss. Congratulations on your win in Jan’s contest… Belle
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Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2023 1:53:00 PM
Belle, thank you so my for the congratulations, compliment and compassion. Peanut was not even sick, and one day I just found her gone, it truly broke my heart, blessings !
Date: 7/31/2023 7:59:00 AM
This was a delightful poem Constance, I had a feeling it may be yours as I know how much your pets mean to you. Many congrats on your top placement and thanks for taking time to enter the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 7/31/2023 8:39:00 AM
Jan, thank you so my for the nice contest, and for my wonderful placement, and the compliment, comment and congrats !
Date: 7/15/2023 10:56:00 AM
- A short life she lived ... but, with lots of love .. a lovely poem, Constance :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 7/16/2023 8:26:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and encouragement. Yes, her life was short but she was loved and died surrounded in it, hugs !

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