Aware of You

In a room, I am 
constantly aware of you. 
When you laugh, or move, 
something base inside me 
is attuned to your being. 

Your magnetism. 
Drawn like a moth to the flame, 
my compass spins to 
point my senses your way. 
Your aura is my true north.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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July 15, 2012 at 7:27 AM
Congrats on your excellent poem being featured this week....Patrick
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July 14, 2012 at 8:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Paula. Love, Carol
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July 8, 2012 at 3:59 PM
paula, congratulations with your featured poem of the week.. hope you are enjoying yours~Always ;-) PD
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January 28, 2010 at 5:38 PM
Beautiful tribute to your husband, Paula! Another beautiful write. Your talent shines! Keep writing as I enjoy! Thanks for your kind comments on my poem! Peace, Audrey
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January 28, 2010 at 5:14 PM
It's wonderful to feel like this about someone...Enjoyed...Marty
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