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Awaking from Stupor

it’s not desire per say but the clinging ~ that stifles soul and stops heart from singing enlivening silence sets our soul free ~ vibrant in the now, joyful and carefree” Nobody wants to feel truth anymore. They cry out loudly for “comic relief” Closing their eyes with a stubborn ignore to block any sight of sadness and grief. More pleasing to speak on beautiful things, stars, skies and flowers, descriptive details. A river’s fluid dance that softly sings, floating on a dream, with wind driven sails How sadly tragic we all cannot be blessed with eyesight of a rose-colored tint and that joy is dispersed with inequity. For a beggar’s life is not Heaven sent May all caring ears be acutely tuned to those human songs that hum in the gloom. 1/22/2024

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Date: 1/24/2024 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Janis Thompson
Date: 1/29/2024 8:26:00 AM
Always glad and honored by your comments. Thanks and blessings, my longtime colleague/artist. Janis
Date: 1/22/2024 9:47:00 PM
You nailed it! A brilliant idea and execution for the contest! I loved it from start to end as if flows seamlessly. Yes u will do well poetess.
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Janis Thompson
Date: 1/22/2024 10:08:00 PM
Thanks, and blessings, my friend... I needed the encouragement.

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