Awakening

The snow drifts to the ground
soft as babies breath
talcing the bottom of the farmer field.
The bows of barren maples brace
for the downy white.

Heat held in the asphalt
melts the first dusting,
its ashen countenance blanching, sullen
as the temperature plummets
cranky in the slush.

The snow laces the still air
edging the scrub brush 
like baptismal lace on an infants gown.
A cradle cap for the bitter sweet
snow white and rose red.

Shush, the dawn traffic says
mother and child abed
Engines purr warmed and primed for morning.
Scrapers clear glass lens of light snow
the farm awakens.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Richards Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 9:49 AM
ps......how are you doing? hope you are hanging in there......thinkin' of ya!! :)
Richards Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 9:48 AM
Ahh...this makes me want to tiptoe through your words. It is such a beautiful poem, ........a simple way of life, that makes one almost envious in spite of the hardships. So brillant...your words 'cranky in the slush'....love that line!
Bailey Avatar
February 11, 2012 at 9:05 AM
Debbie, beautifully written! Cold morning here, but we rarely see snow. Thanks for your help with your comment. I updated! Have a great weekend, Avis
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