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Awakening

quietly spring lies dormant under snow tuning its quiescent kaleidoscope hatching dancing dreams of vivid color asleep underneath winter's white duvet mute on standby eager for the signal sun tickles drowsy lazy skeletons awakens all organic systems go bright first day of spring emerges Submitted on February 15, 2019 for contest MARCH POEMS -OLD OR NEW FOR PRIZES PART 3 OF EASTER SERIES sponsored by CAROLYN DEVONSHIRE - RANKED 2ND

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Jan Allison

Date: 2/20/2019 3:17:00 AM

Such beautiful imagery Line, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/20/2019 6:32:00 AM

Thank you so much, Jan. Most appreciated.

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 2/19/2019 10:57:00 PM

Nice Win Miss Line

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/19/2019 11:39:00 PM

Thank you so much, Timothy.

Charles Messina

Date: 2/19/2019 8:37:00 PM

Wonderful write, Line. Congratulations on your win. Charlie

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/19/2019 9:36:00 PM

Thank you so much, Charles. Most appreciated.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/19/2019 4:41:00 PM

A lovely description of spring's arrival, Line. There were some wonderful entries in this category. Congratulations on your second-place win! Best wishes, Carolyn

Line Gauthier
Date: 2/19/2019 4:53:00 PM

Thanks, Carolyn. Most appreciated. This is an awesome contest.