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Awakened

Awakened from a still slumber on a moonless night, I felt an angel's wing brush across my cheek. The imminence of purity beaming into the shadows. Not thrust upon me, but gently stirring me. The slight touch, a quiet reminder of all I know and all I will never understand. God brought a gift of hope on extended wing. While wafting memories heightened my senses, ripe beauty from a timeless world, eternal, unchanging moved me. As I remembered the wounds, death trailed on the backs of our father's sins, the swords glistening from battles fought long ago. Love changes history, tarnishing man's conquests. Love comes in a moment where a dream merges with truth. A song of worship rising, the lyrics came from my heart. My lips did not speak, they only lifted at the corners in praise. As the stars shined brighter in the absence of moonlight, I listened for countless cries from a distant memory, before traveling kings bowed down to lift up the One greater, before the death of One meant life for all, before the fulfillment of the greatest promise. The only cries heard were mine, tears of joy shimmering in starlight. By Rhonda Johnson-Saunders for An Inspirational Poem contest (Gail Doyle)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 5/25/2012 10:42:00 AM
Very beautiful. Great imagery. Congratulations on the win.
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Date: 5/23/2012 11:20:00 AM
Rhonda, super congratulations on your awesome win with this inspiring write.. Love & hugs Wilma
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Date: 5/22/2012 1:53:00 PM
Rhonda congrats on your great win..David
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Date: 5/22/2012 6:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Gail's "Inspirational Poems" contest Rhonda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/21/2012 7:04:00 PM
Congratulations on a wonderful poem winning the contest.
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Date: 5/21/2012 5:39:00 PM
Congrats on your 1st place, Rhonda. Truely outstanding. Well deserved. Great jo. Nice going. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 5/21/2012 3:53:00 PM
extraordinary!!! rhonda! you, my dear, are so gifted! CONGRATULATIONS!!on your well deserved win! big hug love you bunches:) deb
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Date: 5/21/2012 3:37:00 PM
Congrats on a great write...... George
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Date: 5/21/2012 3:13:00 PM
Rhonda, congratulations on your first place win.. WOW, STUPENDOUS WRITE!!!!!!!!!!
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Date: 5/21/2012 2:14:00 PM
Your soul speaks so loudly in this poem! Truly reverent and in complete adoration of "the ONe"." Congrats on divinely inspired imagery! :) Gwendolen
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Date: 5/21/2012 2:07:00 PM
congrats on your win Rhonda..
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Date: 5/21/2012 1:38:00 PM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 5/21/2012 1:37:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely poem's 1st place win! :)
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Date: 5/21/2012 1:27:00 PM
Congratulations on a winning poem. Beautiful and inspiring - words lifted in praise.
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