Awaken

I Am sad I Am irrelevant I Am an empty abyss I Am a lost soul, wandering I Am an outlandish loner in the spawn of my own world I Am awaken by the power of solidarity, and it feels of pure bliss I Am no longer alone with myself, i am no longer laden I Am a fulfilled soul, engulfed in bliss I Am found, no longer wandering I Am relevant I Am happy I Am ... -skyler pierre baquero

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/25/2016 2:15:00 PM

Nice to read this sweet write again, Skyler...linda

Skat A

Date: 7/28/2015 10:31:00 PM

:) SKAT

Skat A

Date: 5/16/2014 4:43:00 PM

Hi Skyler, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/16/2014 4:34:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Skyler. Hope you find much support here as you get acquainted. Comment on others poetry and they will return the favor. Best wishes.

James Hyler

Date: 5/16/2014 10:46:00 AM

Thank you for sharing :)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/16/2014 8:45:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Skyler :) - I choose your first very well written free verse poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Muhammad Safa Thajudeen

Date: 5/16/2014 4:47:00 AM

Happy to read.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/16/2014 12:19:00 AM

Hi, Skyler, wow..something tells, me you are normal... love this poem... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@