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Awaiting Forgiveness Dad

I was growing up as a crazy girl, thinking every thing would be all right, with no scence to take control of what came up next, then you died. I was left with a shallow heart, not knowing you meant right. Till the day I got caught and old enough to be convicted. I realized life was hard and you meant right. Why do I now dream of you to set me straight and to forgive me dad ? But where are you dad? I feel so bad! I need to know you forgive me dad? I love you dad! I need you dad to tell me in my dreams every thing will be all right.

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Diane Christian

Date: 5/20/2014 8:19:00 AM

welcome to poetry soup a good written poem so much emotion, we all are crazy as kids, i rebelled a bit and im sure your dad loves you too.

Skat A

Date: 5/19/2014 1:10:00 PM

Sylvia, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

James Hyler

Date: 5/19/2014 11:28:00 AM

Thank you for sharing :)

Faye Gibson

Date: 5/18/2014 2:36:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup, Sylvia. Hope you find much support here. Comment on the poems of other members and they will return the favor. Best wishes.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/18/2014 11:07:00 AM

- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Sylvia :) - I choose your first very moving written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/18/2014 7:56:00 AM

Good morning, Sylvia, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@