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autumn's tears

autumn’s tears held by autumn’s frost lingering in sunrise tears soft petals falling 6/30/2015 submitted to – Traditional Haiku #2 – Poetry Contest sponsor – Shadow Hamilton

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Date: 7/6/2015 2:18:00 AM
A big congratulations on your win John!
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Date: 7/3/2015 1:29:00 PM
This is just another example of why you are indeed a haiku master! Congratulations on your well-deserved top class win! Pandita
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Date: 7/2/2015 11:20:00 PM
A worthy first place John, well done. Regards, Viv
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Date: 7/2/2015 10:30:00 PM
an utter beauty. BIG congrats, John.
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Date: 7/2/2015 10:19:00 PM
Amazingly wonderful haiku John! Congrats on top place win!
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Date: 7/2/2015 9:25:00 PM
Wonderful haiku, John! Congrats on your well deserved win :)
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Date: 7/2/2015 7:36:00 PM
Dropping back to say congrats John!
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Date: 7/2/2015 6:15:00 PM
John congratulations on your wonderful win in Shadows contest with this beauty
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Date: 7/2/2015 6:07:00 PM
Beautiful congrats!
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Date: 7/2/2015 6:01:00 PM
Nice write, John , congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve
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Date: 7/2/2015 5:54:00 PM
Lovely Imagery, John, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT*
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Date: 7/2/2015 5:51:00 PM
big congrats John on your 1st place with this excellent and beautiful haiku hugs
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Date: 7/1/2015 10:07:00 AM
Real exquisite haiku. Way to go, John. :-)
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Date: 6/30/2015 10:26:00 PM
Wow amazing,, wonderful imagery John! Exquisite work!
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Date: 6/30/2015 10:19:00 PM
If you get any better I'm going to have to wear sunglasses....wow..Go Lawless....GO GO GO
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Date: 6/30/2015 10:14:00 PM
Exquisite haiku. :) Loved that last line....though sad. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 6/30/2015 8:36:00 PM
John, your haiku is visually beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, dark purple. .
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