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Autumn's Tears

autumn’s tears


held by autumn’s frost
lingering in sunrise tears
soft petals falling


6/30/2015

submitted to – Traditional Haiku #2 – Poetry Contest
sponsor – Shadow Hamilton

Copyright © John Lawless | Year Posted 2015

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Grace Mutindi Date: 7/6/2015 2:18:00 AM A big congratulations on your win John! Login to Reply

Pandita Sietesantos Date: 7/3/2015 1:29:00 PM This is just another example of why you are indeed a haiku master! Congratulations on your well-deserved top class win! Pandita Login to Reply

Viv Wigley Date: 7/2/2015 11:20:00 PM A worthy first place John, well done. Regards, Viv Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 7/2/2015 10:30:00 PM an utter beauty. BIG congrats, John. Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 7/2/2015 10:19:00 PM Amazingly wonderful haiku John! Congrats on top place win! Login to Reply

Laura Leiser Date: 7/2/2015 9:25:00 PM Wonderful haiku, John! Congrats on your well deserved win :) Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 7/2/2015 7:36:00 PM Dropping back to say congrats John! Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 7/2/2015 6:15:00 PM John congratulations on your wonderful win in Shadows contest with this beauty Login to Reply

Lee Carter Date: 7/2/2015 6:07:00 PM Beautiful congrats! Login to Reply

Eve Roper Date: 7/2/2015 6:01:00 PM Nice write, John , congratulations on your win a 7. Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Skat A Date: 7/2/2015 5:54:00 PM Lovely Imagery, John, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win! *SKAT* Login to Reply

Shadow Hamilton Date: 7/2/2015 5:51:00 PM big congrats John on your 1st place with this excellent and beautiful haiku hugs Login to Reply

Kp Nunez Date: 7/1/2015 10:07:00 AM Real exquisite haiku. Way to go, John. :-) Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 6/30/2015 10:26:00 PM Wow amazing,, wonderful imagery John! Exquisite work! Login to Reply

Judy Konos Date: 6/30/2015 10:19:00 PM If you get any better I'm going to have to wear sunglasses....wow..Go Lawless....GO GO GO Login to Reply

Eileen Manassian Date: 6/30/2015 10:14:00 PM Exquisite haiku. :) Loved that last line....though sad. Good luck in the contest. Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 6/30/2015 8:36:00 PM John, your haiku is visually beautiful 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, dark purple. . Login to Reply