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Autumn's Shiver

Autumn’s Shiver There is an almost imperceptible shiver, a subtle shift of wind’s breath, felt only by those who know the season. It is followed by a quickened pace, not yet an urgency, but an awareness, a reminder, of plans to be made. The trees inhale the first drops of sap, leaves feel the tingle of the coming crispness, roots stretch their fingers one more time. Flowers bow their heads in silent prayer dropping petals in a tearless - “au revoir”, as a season, and its fullness, slowly pass. 7/17/2014 submitted to – Simply Beautiful #2 – Poetry Contest sponsor – Kelly Deschler

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Date: 4/26/2015 12:08:00 AM
John, Congratulations on your Simply Beautiful # 2 contest win :) Luv ~LINDA~
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Date: 4/20/2015 3:07:00 PM
And it takes me to another season, that is "simply beautiful".... Thank you for the breath of air ! :)
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Date: 4/20/2015 12:52:00 PM
Nicely captured visions of Autumn's entrance, John. Congrats on your nice win. Sandra
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Date: 4/20/2015 12:17:00 PM
such beautiful imagery and I love the clever title - many congrats on your win in Kelly's contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/19/2015 7:27:00 PM
Yes, autumn has a mysteriousness about it and the cooler weather makes it my favorite season. You perfectly captured it in this descriptive write! Congrats on the win, John!
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Date: 4/8/2015 7:59:00 PM
This is a beauty. Is it "one" more time in the third stanza? ..I think this will do well. BG
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John Lawless
Date: 4/9/2015 6:02:00 AM
OOPs......just goes to show that the mind sees what the mind wants to see. will correct it...thank you for picking that up and for stopping by to read.

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