Autumn's Destiny

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autumn arrives—I savor each color knowing winter soon appears every year it comes green succumbs to crimson, gold not death—destiny

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 10/13/2023 1:04:00 PM

Wow Sara. Hi. Your title caught my eye because I love autumn and she is my favorite season for all the obvious reasons. Yes, destiny not death. Just beautiful poetry with imagery and expression. Have a wonderful night and weekend. Thank you for sharing your skilled poetic talent. Blessings and Peace to both you and Bill. (smile)

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/13/2023 1:18:00 PM

thank you, Ms. Lisa, for stopping by. Autumn is my favorite season too...I wrote a number of poems about it. Thanks for your always encouraging and supportive comments. May you have a blessed evening as well, hugs Sara (smile back at you)

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/4/2023 1:46:00 PM

The concept of destiny and renewal is portrayed through a magnificent cycle in this collection of awe-inspiring haikus.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/5/2023 4:21:00 AM

thanks for stopping by, kind Sotto. I appreciate your thoughtful comments about the magnificent cycle--one that seems so apparent in fall. Have a wonderful day, Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/4/2023 2:17:00 AM

I love autumn. Let us enjoy our destiny. A wonderful haiku. Blessings.

Sara Etgen-Baker
Date: 10/4/2023 3:59:00 AM

I, too, love autumn...such a beautiful season filled with contrasts, literally and metaphorically. Thanks for stopping by and for commenting. Have a blessed day, Sara