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Autumn's Breath - Contest

The countryside is on fire The heat of the colours Warms the soul The crunch of the leaves As though had been in an inferno Bringing delight to everyone The orange and red leaves Paint the trees when its cold To bring alive your memories Only to fall like a dead puppet When all the strings Have been let go Autumn is telling us Winter is nigh Take the warmth of me The autumn breath of fire Implanting reminders of walks amidst the tropical  storm of leaves, as they say goodbye Penned 15 August 2013

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Date: 9/14/2013 9:08:00 AM
congratulations Seren, !!! Fresh & Beautiful... love the Autumn Air.... hugs *LINDA
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Date: 9/13/2013 6:08:00 AM
well captured Autumn at it's best congrats Seren love it Shadow x smile
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Date: 9/12/2013 11:25:00 AM
Splendid and wonderful piece, Seren. GREAT write. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 9/12/2013 8:30:00 AM
nice..... ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/11/2013 7:46:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 9/11/2013 1:22:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative winning work.It is very expressive and descriptive..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 9/11/2013 10:25:00 AM
A wonderful write that painted a lovely picture.Congrats on your win! Hugs
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Date: 9/10/2013 6:18:00 PM
Congratulations Seren
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Seren Roberts
Date: 9/11/2013 12:04:00 AM
Donna , Hi nice to see you, thnks for congrats ...Seren
Date: 9/10/2013 12:22:00 PM
- Autumn has come, it's a fact! - We get more time to sit inside and share beautiful poem! - Nice to join the contest with you, Seren. - Congratulations on your winning poem - Wishing you a beautiful autumn. -oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/11/2013 12:06:00 AM
Hello Anne Lisa, I love autumn, with its colours and crunchy sounds....Seren
Date: 8/23/2013 10:13:00 PM
Very nice poem, Seren! I really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest! I have also entered the "Autumn's Breath" contest. By the way, thank you for reading my poem, "Ghost", and for your nice comments. I really appreciate it!
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Date: 8/23/2013 10:50:00 PM
Hello Kelly nce to see you here... Seren
Date: 8/17/2013 6:30:00 AM
Wonderful poem. Autumn is my favorite season and I love the ending about walking in the storm of leaves.
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Date: 8/17/2013 3:57:00 PM
I love spring and autumn ,.... seren
Date: 8/15/2013 2:24:00 PM
Seren this one got better and better as I went along. I absolutely love the third stanza. The lines about "take the warmth of me" and "the autumn breath of fire" super fine lines!!!
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Seren Roberts
Date: 8/17/2013 3:58:00 PM
Glad u liked it Andrea ....Seren
Date: 8/15/2013 7:32:00 AM
oh don't say good bye to it yet I need more sun..tans a rusting... lovely verse Seren, should do well xx
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Date: 8/17/2013 3:59:00 PM
Thx my friend, i love autumn but not quiet. Yet ..... seren
Date: 8/15/2013 5:45:00 AM
The warmth and the chill of autumn is always in the air during this time of the year! I just love the fall, it is so beautiful during this time period, such a gorgeous sight! I truly loved reading this delightful poem this morning! You have amazed me by the splendor of this incredible piece my friend! What a beautiful piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 8/17/2013 4:00:00 PM
Thx Russell, enjoy lunch .... Seren
Date: 8/15/2013 3:12:00 AM
- I will not say goodbye to summer yet .... - Beautiful poem, Seren! - Good luck in the contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/17/2013 3:56:00 PM
Nor me, wow winter is too long...Seren

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