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Autumns Trees

Autumn, your plethora of ardent colors that spear up then bare, becoming dormant; stretching their branches.
10/1/2020 Writing Challenge - Dodoitsu - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France 7, 7, 7, 5 syllables

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Date: 11/25/2020 10:39:00 PM
This lovely poem has such a mélange of quill colors, Eve. Your pen strokes are looking gorgeous this time of the year. Love an happy holidays.
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Date: 11/16/2020 3:51:00 AM
So beautiful, Eve: My favorite time of year. Best, SuZ
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Date: 10/6/2020 2:51:00 PM
I adore the colours of Autumn, many congratulations on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/5/2020 7:31:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me
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Date: 10/4/2020 12:31:00 PM
So beautiful Eve. Congratulations! Linda
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Date: 10/4/2020 11:51:00 AM
- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2020 11:08:00 AM
Creative and expressive lines penned. I enjoyed reading this one today. I like the stark bare branches showing their shapes in winter. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara
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Date: 10/2/2020 10:40:00 AM
It is pretty with the fall leaves on the trees. It doesn't last long, like you said. Great write! My favorite line, "stretching their branches". Trees do seem to have a mind of their own. :) Love, Angie
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Date: 10/2/2020 6:34:00 AM
Amazing use of description. You said everything needed in so few words. A amazing poem dear Eve.
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Date: 10/2/2020 3:20:00 AM
Beautiful season with all its amazing colour. A lot said in a few lines Eve. Good luck Tom
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Date: 10/2/2020 3:17:00 AM
- Lovely written, Eve :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/2/2020 1:42:00 AM
Well constructed Dodoitsu. I love nature scenes especially the Fall. ~~
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