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Autumns Trees

Autumn, your plethora of
ardent colors that spear up
then bare, becoming dormant;
stretching their branches.

10/1/2020



Writing Challenge - Dodoitsu - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

7, 7, 7, 5 syllables

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Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 11/25/2020 10:39:00 PM

This lovely poem has such a mélange of quill colors, Eve. Your pen strokes are looking gorgeous this time of the year. Love an happy holidays.

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 11/16/2020 3:51:00 AM

So beautiful, Eve: My favorite time of year. Best, SuZ

Jan Allison

Date: 10/6/2020 2:51:00 PM

I adore the colours of Autumn, many congratulations on your win Eve:-) hugs Jan xx

Constance La France

Date: 10/5/2020 7:31:00 AM

Eve, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 10/4/2020 12:31:00 PM

So beautiful Eve. Congratulations! Linda

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/4/2020 11:51:00 AM

- Congratulations on your beautiful poem, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/2/2020 11:08:00 AM

Creative and expressive lines penned. I enjoyed reading this one today. I like the stark bare branches showing their shapes in winter. Reads like a good contender for the contest. Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. Sara

Angela Crabtree

Date: 10/2/2020 10:40:00 AM

It is pretty with the fall leaves on the trees. It doesn't last long, like you said. Great write! My favorite line, "stretching their branches". Trees do seem to have a mind of their own. :) Love, Angie