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Autumnal Classics

Fresh leaves fall gently on the ground without making a sound Piano keys softly caress warmed by sunlight gest Brushing my senses on this delicate afternoon she plays on, as time just croons I notice she has pinned her hair up just so a touch of mascara a light scented oil of " Je ne sais quoi " a touch of blush real or not ? Refreshments are served Victorian style alongside persimmon leaves and tangerine kisses for me Inside this great big elegant room of beauty and romance, I know she is hoping for at least, ...a dance.

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Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 2/2/2024 4:16:00 PM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQjOjo1ViXw

Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/31/2024 8:00:00 PM

Awwn, I could envision myself there, in your poem, such impactful is your artistic wordsmithery, dear Rose! I'm absolutely in awe of this write.. many graceful descriptions throughout which paint the hearts with a unique aura of eloquence..may your soul keep dancing with magic and mystique always! "Piano keys softly caress warmed by sunlight gest", "I notice she has pinned her hair up..a touch of mascara, a light scented oil of " Je ne sais quoi " - Oh, how creative is that! Love this, a FAV :)

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 2/2/2024 4:15:00 PM

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dQjOjo1ViXw

Silent One

Date: 1/31/2024 12:36:00 PM

I hope you get to dance my dear friend.. We were born with our feet moving.. keep dancing..

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/31/2024 12:40:00 PM

lol I don't get to dance every day but I do sing every day, today I'm singing Johnny Cash, " 40 Shades of Green" its an old song, I love music, thanks for stopping by :) https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5Upex3I9jx0

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/31/2024 6:13:00 AM

What a charming description to adorn the romantic stage--lovely write, Vienna. Dance is on the horizon!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/31/2024 12:41:00 PM

Always Vijay, I love dancing, & singing too

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/31/2024 2:39:00 AM

In these ugly days of my life, I yearn for good food. Must diet and swallow poison. A lovely poem, none-the-less.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/31/2024 3:28:00 AM

wish I lived closer, I live too cook lol, take care of yourself, love

Ink Empress

Date: 1/31/2024 1:46:00 AM

This is so beautiful and its so vividly descriptive, i felt like i was watching this scene unfold as i read your well crafted lines dear sweet rose. You are truly a brilliant poetic storyteller. And i get lost within your words, captivated by the serene beauty it emanates. Pleasure reading you. Sending you light always

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/31/2024 3:29:00 AM

Revelations of the soul kisses of the heart, and that is a real good start, :) thank you

Eve Roper

Date: 1/30/2024 6:57:00 PM

an image of elegance in a Victorian style. Love the scene.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 1/31/2024 3:29:00 AM

Thank you dear Eve, hope your keeping well, your always in my thoughts xo