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Poetry/Sonnet/Autumnal
Copyright Protected, ID 09-1582-305-29
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written September 29, 2023
For the International Contest, Autumnal 
Sponsor, Sotto Poet, Judged 10/05/2023

First Place

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"Every leaf speaks bliss to me, fluttering from the autumn tree." Quote by _ Emily Bronte Autumn brings enchanting dapples and hues, with each tremble and each fluttering breeze; I love a walk to look at all the views, the bright red, yellow, gold, and orange trees ! It makes me feel like God has been painting, with strokes of color created just me; all the trees with sweet vibrant paints staining, I am in a lovely dream filigree ! The smell of decay a sweet divine scent, it drifts and is quite intoxicating; that smell of fermenting I will lament, the odor of Autumn captivating ! Oh, it only stays for a few short weeks; but, is magical with its sublime streaks !

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Date: 10/7/2023 9:24:00 PM
A well deserved win, i really love the cadence of this poem and various colours you’ve used here as well as the way this flows with so much depth. Congratulations. I love reading you
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Date: 10/8/2023 4:41:00 AM
Ink, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, love .
Date: 10/6/2023 3:00:00 PM
The scent of decay…feel your exuberance! Congratulations!
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Date: 10/7/2023 7:40:00 AM
Kim, thank you so much for the comment and congratulations, appreciate .
Date: 10/5/2023 2:58:00 PM
Congrats Constance this is a beautiful write a top winner so worthy. A nice reminder that God is painting in autumn, amazing how decay and dying can be so beautiful.
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Date: 10/6/2023 4:16:00 AM
John, so nice to hear from you, and thank you so much for the congratulations, compliment and comment, appreciate.
Date: 10/5/2023 10:25:00 AM
- Yes, the colors are made for you dear Constance ... and your beautiful poem is written for me and everyone ... congratulations on your win :) - hugs
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Date: 10/5/2023 1:40:00 PM
Anne-Lise, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, appreciate and hugs.
Date: 10/5/2023 8:17:00 AM
Your poem, dear Constance, beautifully captures the magnificence of the season. The vibrant colors and intense emotions portrayed within it are truly perfect and mesmerizing. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 10/5/2023 1:41:00 PM
Sotto, thank you so much for the contest, comment, compliment and wonderful placement and congratulation, appreciate.
Date: 10/5/2023 8:10:00 AM
Congratulations on your win.  Your "Autumnal" is a beautiful write/pretty picture. "Love It" Have a blessed day writing away....................
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Date: 10/5/2023 1:42:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and compliment, appreciate and blessings.
Date: 10/1/2023 6:23:00 PM
You bring out the splendor of the season dear Constance, a poem well penned and perfected with color and emotion, I love this :)
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Date: 10/4/2023 8:05:00 AM
Mystic, thank you so much for the compliment and comment, appreciate.
Date: 9/30/2023 1:05:00 PM
God has been painting… what a beautiful reminder, Constance. And, autumn’s short stay is to always keep it new and too keep us in awe of its beauty. Such passion always fills the verse of your poems.
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Date: 10/1/2023 11:49:00 AM
Mark, thank you so much for the nice comment, and compliment, appreciate.
Date: 9/30/2023 5:39:00 AM
Very beautiful smooth sonnet!
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Date: 10/1/2023 11:50:00 AM
Abdullah, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate.
Date: 9/29/2023 11:28:00 PM
It's beautiful can be as it is or give us more. ;0) Replying to your note that says working on my poem.
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Date: 9/29/2023 11:34:00 PM
Karen, thank you so much for the comment, lol, still working on it, almost done !

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