Get Your Premium Membership

Autumnal

As school children scurry to school like the multi-colored leaves that will soon be hurried along the roads by October winds, we feel and we know that a new season is upon us. Stifling summer’s ardor, autumn almost seems to hum a melancholy tune as its breezes caress a multitude of trees, and peaks of distant mountains are garlanded by fleecy clouds in dawn’s gleaming light. A new ardor of its own is brought by autumn as trees become ablaze with a rhapsody of colors - vermillion, amber, rust, gold. Apples red and green adorn orchards’ trees. Sometimes at dusk we can see when persimmon skies might fuse with terrain as the sun descends on rows upon rows of orange pumpkins, round and lying lonely beneath the glow of a luminous full moon. Days crawl a bit faster into lengthening cooling nights. About midway through October, an Indian summer may appear to fulfill my sun-drenched dreams before the season proceeds into November - floating those last glowing days away. Frost touches down, and radiant leaves, like small yellow finches or cardinals. soar through the air one last time before settling and eventually crumbling onto ground growing dull and brown. Oh, lovely autumn, may your bright days linger until they pale. Please, autumn, let winter stall before we fall into its cold clasp.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/5/2023 10:23:00 AM
Congratulations on winning in my contest. Beautiful imagery makes this poetry a visual feast. Your well-written poetry showcases your language talents.
Login to Reply
Date: 10/5/2023 8:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful autumn write/story. "Love It"  Have a blessed day writing away....................
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2023 10:57:00 AM
My favorite season, and you have described it brilliantly, Andrea....and very colorfully, I might add.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2023 6:10:00 AM
This is an excellent free verse from you Ria...I could sense what is like to experience an Autumn season..as you know, here I don't get to see it. I see many beautiful alliterations. Great imagery here: "persimmon sky fuse with terrain as sun.."" lying lonely beneath the full moon".. the contrast between the seasons and the mood of Autumn well described. You know how much I hate my Indian Summer? Haa.. so hot and humid here during April, May.. Am glad you love it there in October. Hugs... ~ Ani
Login to Reply
Date: 9/29/2023 12:50:00 AM
A marvel of a poem. So many colours, so great imagery. I have one ready for posting but it pales compared to yours. You will always be the number one poet. Hugs xx
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2023 1:59:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this autumnal poem Andrea, Well penned
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2023 11:31:00 AM
Truly, a "lovely autumn" painting, Andrea. Have a feeling this will do well in the contest. Bests wishes to you for a win. Blessings of autumn joy like the joy found in your poem!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2023 9:59:00 AM
Beautiful poem with nice imagery. The early October days are nice weather days in cold country side.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2023 6:29:00 AM
Great images throughout, Andrea. Beautiful sights and sounds of autumn. No doubt a winning poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2023 4:17:00 AM
Oh my, what a glorious and mesmerizing description of autumnal ambience with do many russet, gold and orange hued lines, which swirl the soul in the vivid tapestry of autumn's beautiful colours.. I am in awe of your captivating wordplay here as well as these lines "fulfill my sun-drenched dreams", "persimmon skies might fuse with terrain as the sun descends" Gorgeously scribbled and that ending is really profound & heartfelt, truly enjoyed reading this dear poetess, sending love :)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/28/2023 12:20:00 AM
this iz that time Andrea dear poet....keep that pen and slip handy...it just might be this year, the prettiest vinterz uv'em all ;) ya drew me in this write i should tell ya.....have a great new season...much love, james
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2023 9:25:00 PM
Some beautiful imagery Andrea.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2023 8:33:00 PM
Awesome imagery:) beautifully crafted:)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2023 5:51:00 PM
Loved reading this, I love the way you put all the seasons passing after autumn in a beautiful and vivid way. This is a fav!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2023 4:00:00 PM
This was a most enjoyable read for me this evening. Lovely imagery Andrea. I love the autumn and seeing pumpkins :-)
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2023 2:57:00 PM
a magnificent poem that truly captures the beauty of fall. I love the images you included; your lines evoke the feelings one experiences during this lovely transitional season. Just beautifully written, Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 9/27/2023 2:45:00 PM
"Days crawl a bit faster into lengthening cooling nights. About midway through October, an Indian summer may appear to fulfill my sun-drenched dreams" -- What more can be said?! You said it all in this lovely poem, touching all aspects of autumn both seen and unseen, the crumbling, cracking creaking brittle unknown that begins to, though colorfully, chill us all, a bit deeper, more keenly toward the winter of one's too quickly spent season of once imagined hoped for mostly sunny life. What the heck! Brilliant write!
Login to Reply

Book: Shattered Sighs