Autumn Stroll

Good Morning Silent. Hello. Yes, Autumn is wondrous. This is marvelous in execution imagery and expressions. I very much like the third stanza which I found most expressive but rest easy that this entry is solid in its entirety starting with the title to which you did not stray. It was a privilege turning to your page this morning. Thank you for sharing your skilled talent with us. Peace and Blessings always. (smile)

Wonderful poems! Lovely read! Have a great day ~ AA

A clever Autumn poem and good description. Well done

Hello Silent One, I enjoyed the stroll in the forest. It made me feel like I was there. Enjoy your evening my friend. /Darlene\

Such beautiful string of cinquains.... every scene, so unique of Autumn....! "brisk breeze blows pinecones into puddles". I see this before me. So visual and so beautiful, dear Silent One !

Wonderful imagery. Love the last verse with the blackbirds and sweet berries.

Another mark of excellence, unsurprisingly, courses its way to you, Silent One. This Cinquain Form was accomplished effortlessly, my friend. My sincerest compliments and blessings on your placement! Aloha, William

This is absolutely stunning! Who would have thought of using alliterations and painting imagery so seamlessly in an artistic manner, using the form cinquain besides you! I love how you’ve ended this and also the detailed descriptive lines throughout. From crumbling leaves drifting with the wind to, pinecones into puddles… as well as faint wood smoke, odor. So clever how your word touch all the senses of a reader in such eloquence! This is the best cinquain iv read ever in ages! Thank you for

Colors collide in such a beautiful way, when you scribble beyond the shadows. You should allow your pen to dip into this side of poetry a lot more. My best to you, Silent One. ~ Brandy

Very beautiful... I liked the rhyming of the last two lines!

You have flawlessly crafted a series of stunning autumn images, my friend. Your exceptional use of descriptive language brings your canvas to life, even within the limitations of syllable counts.

lots of cool autumn scenes you painted with your descriptive words. Well done

Very descriptive one about this time of year. I enjoyed reading it today. Thanks for sharing your creativity with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K

Beautiful, linked autumn images--splendidly delivered my friend. Excellent descriptions paint your canvas despite the syllable constraints, SO.

Beautifully presented Cinquain. Looks complicated . I'm not a poet who can get these things right, so I'll leave it up to you experts. Good luck in the contest . Hugs

Woah, this cinquain poem took me on a journey which twirled with brisk autumnal essence whilst also waved at the upcoming iced winds.. Your wordplay is so poetically enriched, painting such vivid and breathtaking imageries.. "crisp scarlet, gold carpet is laid", " Branches shiver" Ahh, that's really impactful.. "masking grey gloomy skies", "brisk breeze blows pinecones into puddles" Love the alliterations there! "faint wood smoke", "earthly perfume" Woww, I'm mesmerized!"hungry blackbirds hover"

branches shiver crisp scarlet, gold carpet is laid onwards….masking grey gloomy skies brisk breeze blows pinecones ..ooo those imagery !!! blanket of dark clouds cover sky home time!!! Brilliant end to a brilliant piece brothaaaa