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2026-03-15 Write a Beautiful Shadorma Poetry Contest

Sponsored by: Constance La France 

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Autumn Scenes with Great Delight

Every leaf speaks bliss to me, fluttering from the autumn tree – Emily Brontë

Blow wind blow
blow through rustic leaves
     a few fall
     a carpet
as maple, sweet gum, and oaks
     cover the woods path.

The sweet hush
we traverse the path
     take my hand
     icy way
idyllic panorama
     cottages galore.

Smoke swirled up
the smell of coffee
     outside leaves
     twirled in red
our eyes found fine ecstasy
     Fall increase our love.

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Kendrick Avatar
April 12, 2026 at 4:58 AM
A belated congratulations to you on your winning work. Way to go. Sara K
Singh Avatar
April 5, 2026 at 7:20 AM
Beautiful.Congratulations on your win.
Goldsmith Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 2:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely "Autumn Scenes with Great Delight" write. Great/pretty picture with quote... Have a Beautiful/Blessed Easter writing away.............
Buhagiar Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 9:47 PM
Thank you for your comment and return your congratulations for a lovely poem and high placement.
Anaya Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 1:13 PM
Congratulations on your win, Victor! Beautiful Shadoma and autumn scenes
Buhagiar Avatar
April 2, 2026 at 9:45 PM
Thank you, dear Anaya. Appreciated.
Bayles Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 6:29 PM
You create such a nice experience.
Kitchin Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 2:03 PM
Victor, beautiful and romantic. Best for the contest.
Chircop Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 10:15 AM
Great imagery!
George Avatar
March 29, 2026 at 4:18 AM
So very beautiful. I feel l am walking over a carpet of fallen autumn leaves with the gentle wind blowing around.
Buehler Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 2:15 PM
Wow! These scenes sure delighted me! The tranquility, beauty and magic of autumn are captured here. Good luck in the comtest. :)
Dietrich Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 1:23 PM
Lovely imagery, Victor. This is such a nice form Constance had us work with
Cunningham Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 12:21 PM
You are the master of romantic verse Victor ,my favourite season too. Good luck in the contest. Tom
Sands Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 8:58 AM
This is beautiful Victor. I love it.
Daniels Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 6:19 AM
Indeed does fall increase our love ! Each season has its own way it does this. You do have acute sensory perception, Victor. I appreciate your unique style of writing. Xx.
Kendrick Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 6:08 AM
Ahhh!! Romantic one you have written in this one. This one reads like a great contender for Constance's contest. Way to go. Thank you for sharing it with us. Sara K
May Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 5:55 AM
Nice imagery in this autumn stroll, best wishes
Jones Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 5:19 AM
Oh how beautiful! I admire your ability to write in various forms!Best wishes for the contest Victor!
Edmonds  Avatar
March 28, 2026 at 3:30 AM
Lovely Victor, I feel the winds blow, observe the sweet hush, taste the coffee, it must be love… Beryl
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