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Autumn Romance

Red maple reddening still further Yellow and green hug in arbour Shadow of sugar maple in water Pink murmur in aroused lake Black tupelo in colour avalanche Many a shade on the same radiant branch Magenta and orange in chocolate romance In blue paint the pigments break Children are picking apples Smiling the sombre chapels Roads covered by dark maples In cold wind a coloured shake Under the brilliant yellow of Aspen In the green rocky surrounding Through kisses into a heaven Foliage of love we make Our orange desires breaking into On Baldcypress a deep reddening view Reckless waves in joy we plunge through A crimson boat to take _______________________________________________ September 21, 2017

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Date: 10/2/2017 8:24:00 PM
I'm back again Probir to congratulate you on a wonderful win with your stunning write! :)
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Date: 10/3/2017 12:42:00 PM
Thank you, Susan ...
Date: 10/2/2017 9:17:00 AM
A portrait of nature in words. Beautiful, Probir. ...Fran
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Date: 10/3/2017 12:43:00 PM
Thank you for visiting and liking too ...
Date: 9/30/2017 1:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your fine placement Probir! : )
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Date: 10/1/2017 7:05:00 AM
Thank you, Connie ...
Date: 9/29/2017 7:04:00 PM
Lovely imagery in your beautifully written 'autumn romance' poem, Probir. Congratulations on your fine podium win. Sandra
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Date: 9/29/2017 6:40:00 PM
Probir, a lovely love poem, congratulations on your win !
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Date: 9/29/2017 10:38:00 PM
Thank you, BW ...
Date: 9/29/2017 8:16:00 AM
Congratulations Probir! :)
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Date: 9/29/2017 10:40:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi ...
Date: 9/29/2017 5:35:00 AM
Congrats Probir!
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Date: 9/29/2017 10:40:00 PM
Thank you, Vijay ...
Date: 9/29/2017 12:50:00 AM
Congratulations on your great win as usual with a fabulous poem.
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Date: 9/29/2017 5:03:00 AM
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Date: 9/28/2017 11:45:00 PM
Just such exquisite description and imagery, Probir, with romance, charm, whimsy, and innocence - I enjoyed this very much, from beginning to end! Blessings and congrats on this well-deserved win, my friend! :-)
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Date: 9/29/2017 5:04:00 AM
Thank you for enjoying my poem, Greg ...
Date: 9/24/2017 9:36:00 PM
Love the images and the colors. Great write, Probir,
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Date: 9/24/2017 11:31:00 PM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/22/2017 5:57:00 AM
- A game with colors in your beautiful autumn poems, Probir - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/22/2017 9:54:00 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise ...
Date: 9/21/2017 8:09:00 PM
Lots of imagery in this romantic verse, Probir. Lovely job and good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/21/2017 10:53:00 PM
Thanks, Andrea ...
Date: 9/21/2017 7:46:00 PM
your painted canvas is beautiful, Probir, evoking romance.. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 9/21/2017 10:53:00 PM
Thank you, Eve ...
Date: 9/21/2017 5:34:00 PM
Hi Probir a beautiful and colorful write. Your second stanza is stunning and with great and lovely lines throughout especially; 'Through kisses into a heaven Foliage of love we make', Pure heavenly romance my friend! :)
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Date: 9/21/2017 10:56:00 PM
I am glad it delighting to you, Susan ... Thanks ...
Date: 9/21/2017 5:02:00 PM
Beautifully written Probir :)
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Date: 9/21/2017 10:57:00 PM
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Date: 9/21/2017 2:20:00 PM
A phantasmagoric painting of autumn with colors divine my friend, Probir! Excellent!
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Date: 9/21/2017 10:58:00 PM
Thank you so much, Demetrios ...
Date: 9/21/2017 2:13:00 PM
A well written romantic tribute to love --full of imagery and colors--well done Probir--best wishes for a win!
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Date: 9/21/2017 10:59:00 PM
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