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Autumn Reverie

a squirrel panics amongst rotting leaves, tired from preparing to rest

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John Lawless

Date: 11/8/2023 2:40:00 PM

...wondering where he buried his.... well he's tired anyway...Nicely done.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/8/2023 2:50:00 PM

He's an overthinker but it works for him - thanks for your comment John :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 11/8/2023 9:25:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A creative/fun write. The little ones need food for the long winter. Enjoy your day/win writing away........

Di11y Da11y
Date: 11/8/2023 10:07:00 AM

Thanks Paula - it's hard to write so many Autumn poems so just tried to see a different angle. I appreciate your kind words x

Vickey Rhymer

Date: 10/28/2023 10:16:00 PM

The harvest will not wait and soon arrives the cold.Time strapped squirrel soldiers on knowing that when the world turns bitter his larder of forage will be oh so sweet.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/29/2023 12:11:00 AM

Yes, let's hope he drifts off feeling a bit smug :)

Clive Culverhouse

Date: 10/28/2023 1:45:00 PM

I like the idea of a squirrel panicking

Di11y Da11y
Date: 10/28/2023 2:27:00 PM

Well I'm not sure what that says about a person haha! Thanks for your comment :)