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Autumn Rain

Summertime is growing weary, Welcome to the autumn rain. A new season taking over, Hydrating the earth again. Arid land with celebration Greedily absorbs each drip, With the dry and dusty flora Raising eager mouths to sip. Running rivulets of water Turning grasses back to green It is showering time for nature Every plant a new washed sheen. Summer lingering in spasms, She must abdicate with grace. This is changing of the seasons. Fall is slipping into place. Autumn dressed in leaves of color Gold and scarlet, every tone, Pre-apology for winter With a splendor all her own.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 4/16/2018 1:05:00 PM
Joyce you have a stunning ability to bring each season to life! Another beautiful write!
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Date: 8/29/2014 6:27:00 PM
This is a lovely write on autumn rain, and the abundant beauty of the season. I feel so refreshed after reading your poem!.... Congrats on your win, Joyce! Very nicely done!
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Date: 8/24/2014 2:28:00 PM
Favorite lines: Summer lingering in spasms, She must abdicate with grace. Yes, and that makes me a little sad, although Fall is my favorite season.
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Date: 8/24/2014 11:37:00 AM
I like your poem, Joyce. Nice imagery of how Autumn takes over Summer's reign. Congratulation! Sandra
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Date: 8/23/2014 5:48:00 PM
Hi Joyce, Nice fluid poem. "Pre-apology" is a great concept. Congratulations on your well deserved win. Keep up the good work. Have a pleasant evening. Take care. Earl
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Date: 8/23/2014 9:01:00 AM
This is flowing with rhyme and imagery; love the ending. Congrats on a deserved win, Joyce:) take care // paul
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Date: 8/23/2014 6:53:00 AM
- Dear Joyce, congratulations on your winning poem in the contest "Seasonal Bliss" Sponsored by: Regina Riddle. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/23/2014 6:46:00 AM
Prodigious..Sara ...The rain has created a very hot sauna here..
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Date: 8/23/2014 1:22:00 AM
Enjoyed the autumn rain. congrats on the win, Joyce
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Date: 3/11/2012 4:40:00 PM
congrats Joyce on featured poem this week on PS.. a lovely one to share with luv..
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Date: 3/9/2012 12:17:00 PM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/5/2012 7:18:00 PM
Congratulations Joyce on the featuring of "Autumn Rain."
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Date: 11/15/2008 7:38:00 PM
Exceptional flow and rhyming. Marvelous word use and imagery... Well done Joyce~ Best wishes, Keith
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