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Autumn Outing

Logs stacked by a decaying shed; scent of burning embers from chimney’s wafting past my face; I breathe in the crisp evening chill. The woodlands, a palette of color waiting to be laid out on a canvas by my bristles; VanDyke orange, red, brown and yellow; I watch the yellow passing by the sunset and it blinks to deeper orange hues. Oils blending, scent of linseed and turpentine mingle with the log fires and overhead flocks darken the skies winging southwards. The setting sun lends it’s hues to the naked trees as leaves float endlessly downwards to rest upon an emerald bed. I glance up from my palette to see a doe standing there, right beside a Douglas fir; her eyes trust mine and in that simple moment I know, there is a God.
10-6-19 Enter the 'Best free verse July-December 2019' Poetry Contest John Hamilton

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Date: 12/13/2019 5:13:00 AM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in John's Free Verse contest, ML - he knows his stuff! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :o)
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/16/2019 3:02:00 PM
Thanks and a big congratulations on your placement, well done.
Date: 12/11/2019 7:28:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem M.L.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/11/2019 8:04:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 12/11/2019 10:47:00 AM
Great poem M.L loved the beautiful description of nature and in the end giving glory to God, just how I like it, congrats on a fine win!
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 12/11/2019 8:04:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 10/13/2019 9:10:00 AM
Darlene is right MLK - this poem is awesome - when we go to the Kruger National Park it is most game we see but there are some birds with plumage that is unbelievable - two come to mind the lilac breasted roller and the saddle billed stork please google them, they are really beautiful. Love this poem a fav. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/17/2019 4:58:00 AM
I will do that Jennifer. Thanks so much and I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/8/2019 10:57:00 AM
Can't say it any better than Darlene did just below me: Awesome poem!! Warm wishes, Gershon
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/17/2019 4:57:00 AM
Many thanks Gershon, I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 10/7/2019 1:53:00 PM
Hello M.L. Kiser,this poem is awsome!!! Have a nice day my friend.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/17/2019 4:57:00 AM
Thanks so much Darlene; you have a great day.
Date: 10/7/2019 12:04:00 PM
The charm of Autumn and the beauty of your painting! How inspiring is Autumn! A bountiful season that never cease to give from its soul and wonders.. and for a highly talented poet to dip his pen and paint! You have already done this, M. L. Kiser! An amazing poetry! Regards and blessings
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/17/2019 4:56:00 AM
Wow, thank you so much, I am thrilled by your words. Blessings to you as well.
Date: 10/7/2019 9:00:00 AM
Beauty of autumn in every verse..splendid imagery..I really enjoyed the read.
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M. L. Kiser
Date: 10/17/2019 4:56:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thanks again.

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