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Autumn Nights In Pakistan

Yasawa Island breeze covered the coast I in your rapture as we danced wildly through sunsets in Nadi your smile capture my essence while the tides roared along calm seaside's my heart sang tropical rhythms melodies gathered beneath my toes deep within the warm sand laughter rang out over the coastal waters hints of mahogany covered the rapture of us orange marble stones we collected caressing cinnamon colored seashells

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Date: 8/8/2023 8:49:00 AM
I miss collecting the sea shells there the most… you took me back to my birthplace with this write.. enjoyed :)
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 8/14/2023 4:38:00 AM
thank you so much.. blessings
Date: 3/27/2022 9:14:00 AM
This is absolutely gorgeous. Love it!!
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 8/14/2023 4:39:00 AM
wow thank you sweetie. blessings
Date: 12/16/2021 11:37:00 AM
Hello Yolanda, A beautiful scene you have painted with your words in poetry. So romantic. Enjoy yur day my friend/
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 8/14/2023 4:39:00 AM
sending hugs many blessings
Date: 10/29/2021 3:54:00 AM
Beautiful composition of memory, moments and feelings! No words! Just loved it!
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Yolanda Nicholsen
Date: 11/4/2021 3:39:00 AM
thank you...

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