William Kelii Kekaula Poet Dodoitsu

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Autumn Lofty Living Hues

Autumn Lofty Living Hues

Autumn's tall leafy live hues
cardinal oaks monarch elms
goldfinch palms arctic fox birch
tiger hid smoke trees

***Syllabically; 7775

2020 September 30
*1st Place*
Writing Challenge - Dodoitsu
~~Constance La France

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Andrea Dietrich October 12, 2020 at 11:09 AM hey congrats on TOP win, William. Sorry seeing this so late. William Kelii Kekaula October 12, 2020 at 11:21 AM Late than...as long it's seen, thanks Andrea, Aloha! William

Jeanne Mcgee October 7, 2020 at 6:56 AM beautiful William. and I love the image too. Congrats on your 1st place. William Kelii Kekaula October 7, 2020 at 11:22 AM Hearty thanks, Jeanne, for your kind sharing, Aloha! William

Jan Allison October 6, 2020 at 2:40 PM what stunning imagery William, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx William Kelii Kekaula October 6, 2020 at 2:44 PM Thanks, Jan, between watching baseball but was able to read your brilliant Halloween feel of Regina's October earlier, a short lull here, Aloha! William

Constance La France October 5, 2020 at 7:27 AM William, congratulations on your win in my Dodoitsu Writing Challenge with this excellent poem, a FAV for me, nice image too _Constance William Kelii Kekaula October 5, 2020 at 8:06 AM A heart filled thanks for another inspiring opportunity, highest honorable placement, and wondrous considerations, Constance, Aloha! William

Carol Mitra October 4, 2020 at 8:28 PM Amazing riot of colours...Congrats on your win William. William Kelii Kekaula October 4, 2020 at 8:43 PM Very expressive, Carol, thank you, Aloha! William

Linda Alice Fowler October 4, 2020 at 12:26 PM Glorious depiction William. Congratulations! Linda William Kelii Kekaula October 4, 2020 at 12:28 PM Most generous of you, Linda, Aloha! William

Jo Chamberlain October 4, 2020 at 12:04 PM Congratulations your win. :-) William Kelii Kekaula October 4, 2020 at 12:05 PM Thank you kindly, Joanna, Aloha! William

Anne-Lise Andresen October 4, 2020 at 11:54 AM - Congratulations on your beautiful poem, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) William Kelii Kekaula October 4, 2020 at 11:58 AM A wondrous thanks, Anne-Lise, Aloha! William