Autumn Leaves Sigh

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separation turns euphoric world bleak fall leaves rustle wistful sigh failed hushed longing lingers Written on September 4, 2021 For “Kimo Form Old Or New” Poetry Contest Sponsor: Constance La France Syllables (10-7-6) checked by HMS.com FIRST PLACE

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Anitha Jayasankar

Date: 9/9/2021 4:04:00 AM

This is such an inspiring beautiful take in this contest dear sweet Mala... and very creative... Congrats on your win... Hugs... ~ Ani

Constance La France

Date: 9/8/2021 9:02:00 PM

Mala, congratulations on your win in my Kimo Contest with your beautiful poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 9/8/2021 9:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. A wonderful Autumn write and picture. I love this time of the year. Have a blessed day with your win...............

Beata Agustin

Date: 9/7/2021 4:27:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/7/2021 5:46:00 AM

Thanks, Beata.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/7/2021 3:08:00 AM

Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Sara

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 9/7/2021 5:46:00 AM

Thanks, Sara.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/6/2021 5:53:00 PM

Autumn does sigh with a pensive longing - a fall lament. Love this wistful personification. Congratulations on your win dear friend. This is so creative and very unique in its viewpoint! Sending you :)'s and hugs.