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Autumn Leaves Change

"Life is like a rope. Each person a string entwined to make us stronger." As the spirit soars with the wind across a darken sky, we breathe in a scent of life, gripped to the land First autumn leaves changing exuding earthen tones of bother preparing to blanket, with love a languished skin lost in fear Heated nights cut short time uncovering the fright, aged with care in an unopened bottle of blue, waiting as muffled footfalls fade away

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 10/11/2017 1:18:00 AM
Such another precious treasure my dear friend Tim. I'm so grateful I've few min. to drop by here today to read more from you. Sorry for the late visit coz of my very hectic sched at work. Just came back for a trip and now preparing for another one. Best wishes always. Hugs.
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Date: 10/8/2017 5:03:00 PM
Let's open that bottle of blue as we listen to you.
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Date: 10/7/2017 10:51:00 AM
triple-wowsa! ~j
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Date: 10/7/2017 3:54:00 AM
This is a beautiful poem. I always love your poetic language, even if I don't always understand.
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Date: 10/6/2017 11:44:00 PM
hmmm. I like this, Tim, but I feel there's some deeper hidden meaning that I'm missing... especially in that final stanza. Still, it's a lovely read. That first line, the quote, is really nice, like a chord of three strands kind of thing.
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Date: 10/6/2017 10:26:00 PM
Very beautiful, and I see myself a bit in there.
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Date: 10/6/2017 8:51:00 PM
I find this poem spiritual. I can feel the sense of the spirit when I read this poem. have a nice evening my friend.
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Date: 10/6/2017 8:38:00 PM
Not sure I understood it but it has great tone, Tim. Love the images!!
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