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Poetry/Free Verse/Autumn Leaves
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1680-600-12
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
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Written, October 12, 2024
For the International Contest, Autumn Leaves
Sponsor, JCB Bru, Judged 10/23/2024

FIRST PLACE

"A rain of lurid leaves falls thro' the air, and lies in drifted heaps
upon the ground, and thro' the hawthorn hedge with murmuring
sounds of sorrow keen, and the wind bemoans the fair dead ..."

                           — John Brenizer, "An Autumn Idyl," 1897

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in the autumn breezes silent trees shed their leaves in shades of vivid yellow, orange, red purple, brown, and maroon and the many hues 'tween they rustle beneath the quiet weeping trees then, fluttering twirl, leap painted by nature's watercolor brush divine, sublime are the withering leaves fading away shortening daylight days, temperatures cooling and leaves gather in stained-glass heaps pigments and tints dwindling fading, fading like an old vintage photograph I love to touch veined leaves trace those souls dying that fall apart crumbling away, falling they are quite dead ... but to me they are still beautiful

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Date: 10/25/2024 2:39:00 PM
I see your delightful work on the winners' list. I am so happy for you that it is there. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara
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Date: 10/26/2024 8:27:00 AM
Sara, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations, love Constance
Date: 10/25/2024 9:49:00 AM
Lovely form and sentiments Constance. I can see the beauty in the stained glass heaps. Congratulations! :)
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Date: 10/26/2024 8:27:00 AM
Linda, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations, love Constance
Date: 10/24/2024 2:02:00 AM
Lovely, congratulations, Constance:)
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Date: 10/25/2024 8:54:00 AM
Joanna, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, love Constance
Date: 10/23/2024 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely "Autumn Leaves" write. Love your pretty picture.... I love the cooler weather with all the pretty colors. Great Write... Have a wonderful Autumn day writing away.................
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Date: 10/25/2024 8:55:00 AM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and comment, love Constance
Date: 10/23/2024 9:51:00 AM
Hey, Constance. Congrats on your winning placement. Beautiful imagery. Cheers from Newfoundland. J.
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Date: 10/25/2024 8:56:00 AM
Jim, thank you for the congrats and compliment, blessings, from Ontario, Constance
Date: 10/14/2024 12:27:00 PM
I do believe you're covered everything about Autumn, with your Autumn leaves Constance ,good luck in the contest. Xx
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Date: 10/15/2024 11:46:00 AM
John, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and encouragement, blessings, Constance
Date: 10/14/2024 11:09:00 AM
nice poem and layout. maple leaves are all over beneath the tree in fall.
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Date: 10/15/2024 11:47:00 AM
Jay, thank you for the compliment and comment, blessings, Constance
Date: 10/12/2024 11:41:00 AM
Reminds me of a maple tree leaf. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I appreciate you giving me a place on the winners' list in your contest. Sara K
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Date: 10/12/2024 10:14:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the comment, ad your welcome, love Constance
Date: 10/12/2024 5:32:00 AM
Oh so very lovely. The magic of autumn with flying and fallen leaves is beautifully captured. Love the lay out of the poem too. All the Best, dear Constance.
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Date: 10/12/2024 10:14:00 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment, and comment, love Constance

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