Notes About The Poem

Poetry/Free Verse/Autumn Leaves
Copyright Protected, ID 10-1680-600-12
All Rights Reserved, 2024, Constance La France
Copying any part of this work is prohibited without permission

Human  - Written

Written, October 12, 2024
For the International Contest, Autumn Leaves
Sponsor, JCB Bru, Judged 10/23/2024

FIRST PLACE

"A rain of lurid leaves falls thro' the air, and lies in drifted heaps
upon the ground, and thro' the hawthorn hedge with murmuring
sounds of sorrow keen, and the wind bemoans the fair dead ..."

                           — John Brenizer, "An Autumn Idyl," 1897

Field & Forest | Free Web Headers

Autumn Leaves



in the autumn breezes silent trees shed their leaves
      in shades of vivid yellow, orange, red 
        purple, brown, and maroon
          and the many hues 'tween
            they rustle
              beneath
           the quiet weeping trees
        then, fluttering twirl, leap
      painted by nature's watercolor brush
divine, sublime are the withering leaves fading away
  shortening daylight days, temperatures cooling
      and leaves gather in stained-glass heaps
        pigments and tints dwindling
          fading, fading like an 
            old vintage
              photograph
          I love to touch veined leaves
        trace those souls dying
      that fall apart crumbling away, falling
they are quite dead ... but to me they are still beautiful
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024


Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/25/2024 2:39:00 PM
I see your delightful work on the winners' list. I am so happy for you that it is there. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 10/26/2024 8:27:00 AM
Sara, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations, love Constance
Date: 10/25/2024 9:49:00 AM
Lovely form and sentiments Constance. I can see the beauty in the stained glass heaps. Congratulations! :)
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 10/26/2024 8:27:00 AM
Linda, thank you for the compliment, comment and congratulations, love Constance
Date: 10/24/2024 2:02:00 AM
Lovely, congratulations, Constance:)
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 10/25/2024 8:54:00 AM
Joanna, thank you for the compliment and congratulations, love Constance
Date: 10/23/2024 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely "Autumn Leaves" write. Love your pretty picture.... I love the cooler weather with all the pretty colors. Great Write... Have a wonderful Autumn day writing away.................
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 10/25/2024 8:55:00 AM
Paula, thank you for the congratulations and comment, love Constance
Date: 10/23/2024 9:51:00 AM
Hey, Constance. Congrats on your winning placement. Beautiful imagery. Cheers from Newfoundland. J.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 10/25/2024 8:56:00 AM
Jim, thank you for the congrats and compliment, blessings, from Ontario, Constance
Date: 10/14/2024 12:27:00 PM
I do believe you're covered everything about Autumn, with your Autumn leaves Constance ,good luck in the contest. Xx
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 10/15/2024 11:46:00 AM
John, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and encouragement, blessings, Constance
Date: 10/12/2024 11:41:00 AM
Reminds me of a maple tree leaf. Thanks for sharing this one with us. I appreciate you giving me a place on the winners' list in your contest. Sara K
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 10/12/2024 10:14:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the comment, ad your welcome, love Constance
Date: 10/12/2024 5:32:00 AM
Oh so very lovely. The magic of autumn with flying and fallen leaves is beautifully captured. Love the lay out of the poem too. All the Best, dear Constance.
Login to Reply
La France Avatar
Constance La France
Date: 10/12/2024 10:14:00 PM
Valsa, thank you so much for the compliment, and comment, love Constance
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Radiant Verses: A Journey Through Inspiring Poetry

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter