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For Jcb Brul's Autumn Leaves Contest

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Autumn Leaves

On days of brisk wind, I like to see the autumn leaves - bold and beautiful – like miniature colorful kites flying up into crisp air, then descending to the ground where they scatter and tumble sometimes like tiny acrobats along the streets and sidewalks. Enjoy the crunch of them beneath your feet! Some of the leaves of deciduous trees are hangers-on that stay dull brown until they drop at last in spring whilst other trees shed their glorious gowns becoming skeletons midst the evergreens of winter. Savor their gold, crimson, and amber beauty while you can, and be like me - Don’t bother to rake them away. Let those fallen leaves of autumn linger on your lawn through winter’s chill. They are doing nature a favor - replenishing the soil and providing home and fodder for small animals and birds!
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Johnson Avatar
November 8, 2024 at 6:21 AM
A real Gem. Well chosen pictures like 'colorful kites'; clever sounds of 'crunch under my feet'. I was never bold enough to leave them on the ground. I wish.
Kendrick Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 2:31 PM
I see your delightful work on the winners' list. I am so happy for you to see it there. Way to go. Congratulations. Sara K
Fowler Avatar
October 25, 2024 at 9:46 AM
Congrats Andrea! Love the tiny acrobats. :)
Lawless Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 6:13 AM
Wonderful Andrea, just leave those leaves alone.....they got work to do. Congrats on the top spot, well deserved (IMNSHO)
Daniel Avatar
October 24, 2024 at 1:59 AM
Lovely win, Andrea, congratulations:)
Goldsmith Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 12:58 PM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your wonderful write with great pictures...  Have a wonderful Autumn day writing away.................
Healey Avatar
October 23, 2024 at 9:47 AM
Great imagery, Andrea. Congrats on your winning placement.
Kingston Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 6:32 PM
I love poems with beautiful imagery, this is certainly a lovely one. Autumn gives us so much to write about doesn't it? It is such a sensory season. Your poem is nice to read outloud and like the season, I liked it so much
Dietrich Avatar
October 21, 2024 at 7:32 PM
Do I know you already? I enjoyed your comments. Let me check out some of your poems.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
October 15, 2024 at 2:30 PM
Ravishingl picture of Autumn, Dear Andrea! Fall leaves make me feel very nostalgic!
Gasun Avatar
October 14, 2024 at 12:47 AM
What a splendid autumn imagery my dear poet friend. How I love to stay long in this place if I've chance. I love this poem a lot. Thanks for sharing. All the best in the contest. Hugs. God bless you always, your loved ones and your writings.
George Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 6:23 AM
Beautifully done. To have a mind not to rake the fallen leaves is admirable, when we consider the benefits they do to the soil and young plants. All the Best dear Andrea ....
Buhagiar Avatar
October 13, 2024 at 5:30 AM
You deserve a high placement. Your imagery is splendid. Your sounds and visuals of Autumn are of high degree. Hugs.
Read Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 1:18 PM
Those falling leaves of Autumn, a beauty to behold, silently they descend, covering fields with nature's gold. Good luck in the contest Andrea.
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 2:03 PM
By the way, regarding your feelings on punctuation: here in your comment to me, your punctuation is superb.
DiMino Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 12:35 PM
Lovely, visual write. And excellent nature advice. Got to rake them up though, the wife can't tolerate the mold.
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 2:05 PM
Thanks, Joe. My husband is disabled now and can barely walk around the house. Thankfully neither of us have ever raked even one leaf!
Warlov Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 1:08 AM
The "carpet" or strata of various trees produce specific symbiotic ecosystems for various beneficial plants in mitigating extreme temperature changes and even insects like bumble bees use them to survive through winter Nature's a trip!
Magdalinos Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 11:51 PM
Very lovely poem ,dear Andrea. Well done! Have a great weekend!
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 2:05 PM
Thanks, Mulu
May Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 5:36 PM
'They dance in the air like colorful kites' Very nicely penned Andrea
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 2:06 PM
Thanks. It is probably my only really creative line. Heehee
Hind Avatar
October 11, 2024 at 4:55 PM
What a beautiful poem <3 Liked "colorful kites"- if this is for a contest, best of luck!
Dietrich Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 2:06 PM
Thanks, dear Paige.
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