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Autumn In Our Hearts

~ Sun filled skies ignite the trees in colorful array of pastel leaves and scented pine, October on display The beauty that does meet our eyes so comforts all we view, a Sunday drive, uncharted roads, together me and you A softer breeze we shall not feel, the wind about our hair, on journeys off to anywhere the two of us shall share This scenery of heaven sent frames every street we drive, your hand in mine, a favorite song, so glad we are alive Majestic oaks, their leaves of gold, maples traced in red, soon to fall the chilly earth, a soft enchanted bed Chrysanthemums and dahlias, the magic that we find, pumpkin patches line the country lanes down which we wind Fun is our companion, constant, everywhere we go, precious is the feeling as we take in nature’s show On this fall adventure leaving summer in the past, enjoying every moment, hoping for our time to last A lazy day, the sun is bright and you are here with me, nothing ‘cross this valley shows more beauty than I see When I look into your eyes reflecting skies above and feel the joy within they bring by showing me your love We were meant to be right here, wherever this may be, hand in hand in nature’s home, a feeling oh so free Or anywhere that we may roam, this wondrous season starts, for happiness is you and me with autumn in our hearts 9/12/19 Written for the: Fall into Fall Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 9/25/2019 9:10:00 AM
That was beautiful. Congratulations on your win !!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/25/2019 9:55:00 AM
Thank you so very much Heather
Date: 9/24/2019 12:57:00 PM
- Congratulations on your lovely win poem, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 1:13:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. You are always so kind to me.
Date: 9/24/2019 12:42:00 PM
Chris congratulations on your win in the contest with this wonderful write!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 1:13:00 PM
Thank you so very much. I am happy you enjoyed this one.
Date: 9/23/2019 1:37:00 AM
Aha and I told you too chris! Congratulations!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 8:57:00 AM
Yes you did. : ) Thanks so much Brenda for your nice words always
Date: 9/22/2019 5:27:00 PM
back to say congratulations on the win with this one...i told you it was beautiful... hugs :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/23/2019 8:57:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. I appreciate you.
Date: 9/13/2019 4:02:00 PM
Gorgeous poem, Chris. I love it! Janice
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Chris Green
Date: 9/13/2019 4:07:00 PM
Thank you so very much Janice. I am thrilled you do.
Date: 9/13/2019 8:10:00 AM
This is such a beautiful creation. Your talent shines through. I hope you do wonderfully in the contest and many blessings.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/13/2019 8:43:00 AM
Thank you so very much Regina. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 9/12/2019 8:28:00 PM
I love the imagery in this, but what I love most is where it took me emotionally ~ oh, what a feeling :) I also found myself thinking about what music might be playing in the background. Not sure why ~ Lovely piece!
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Hello There
Date: 9/13/2019 11:42:00 AM
Lol. It's there, but just out of reach. I thought you might have one... Hmm... Maybe something new? Let me think.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/13/2019 7:39:00 AM
Thank you HT. I am thrilled you liked this one so much and now I am curious as to what song might have come to mind for you. Care to share?
Date: 9/12/2019 4:43:00 PM
this poem is beautiful, with the sentiment, the scenery, the end lines...your words took me through the mountains of my state and made me long to see the colors change, as much as i dislike the cold, the fall is so beautiful up state...i think this one will be on top of the winner's list, shining like autumn itself :) hugs
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Chris Green
Date: 9/12/2019 4:54:00 PM
I am thrilled you enjoyed this little fall journey today Sandy. It wasn't completely happy with this one but if you liked it then it is ok with me. Thank you my friend.
Date: 9/12/2019 3:47:00 PM
this poem is magical, chris! i don't see how anyone can top it for the contest (or even just writing a poem about fall not for a contest!) bravo!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/12/2019 3:56:00 PM
Thank you so very much Ilene. I am thrilled you liked this one so much. I appreciate your kind words always my friend.
Date: 9/12/2019 2:23:00 PM
Chantelle has a real treat awaiting her with this enchanted autumnal ride. To enjoy and enjoy, an enjoy yet again. Just beautiful, Chris. Voila! :) gw
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Chris Green
Date: 9/12/2019 2:29:00 PM
Thanks my friend. I wasn't entirely happy with it but it is what it is. I am happy though that you liked it.
Date: 9/12/2019 1:53:00 PM
This is so nice to read today Chris. A favorite for me. Excellent :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/12/2019 2:03:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. I am sure driving country roads in fall and seeing the change in scenery is something you are use to, for me I have to use my imagination and rely on memory. : )
Date: 9/12/2019 12:48:00 PM
Oh so beautiful! You got this contest in the bag! Aha but I am not entering lol! See shine on Chris!;)
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Brenda Chiri
Date: 9/12/2019 2:05:00 PM
Oh stop it! Hahaha! Not suppose to the. It around on me!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/12/2019 2:02:00 PM
Thanks Brenda for your comment and for not entering the contest (yet) because at least then I have a chance. : )

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