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Oct. 17, 20
For: Your best rhyming contest#3 poetry contest
Sponsored by: L. Milton Hankins
Placed 3rd in contest

Autumn Games

Shadows dance, playing among the trees
                      They pause, wrestling with the lonesome breeze....

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Anne E Sangster - K

November 16, 2021 at 9:35 PM

This is excellent Paulette! I can see the shadows dancing among the trees. A beautiful poem. Cheers Anne :-)

Paulette Calasibetta

November 17, 2021 at 6:54 AM

Hi Anne, Thank you for stopping by...glad you enjoyed the visual ~ Blessings, Paulette

John Watt

October 28, 2021 at 4:21 PM

Paulette, I love the movement of your descriptive words, the dancing of the shadows and the wrestling between they do with the breeze. A lovely couplet of a chilly autumn day with a little touch of melancholy. Nicely done!

Paulette Calasibetta

October 28, 2021 at 4:38 PM

Thank you for your kind words, John. I am so inspired by Autumn~it makes an awesome prompt. Blessings, Paulette

Mystic Rose Rose

October 24, 2021 at 1:40 PM

they seem to have a life of their own lol, lovely couplet my dear, stay beautiful and brilliant, the sun like you that way :)

Paulette Calasibetta

October 24, 2021 at 2:40 PM

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, Paulette

Regina Mcintosh

October 24, 2021 at 1:39 PM

Love that! God bless you. Love, Gina

Paulette Calasibetta

October 24, 2021 at 2:41 PM

Thank you Gina, glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, Paulette

Vijay Pandit

October 24, 2021 at 11:22 AM

Wonderful imagery, Paulette. I enjoyed the read.

Paulette Calasibetta

October 24, 2021 at 2:42 PM

Vijay, thank you, glad you enjoyed the imagery. Blessings, Paulette

Andrea Dietrich

October 23, 2021 at 10:00 AM

I see this was a winner. Awesome. Well deserved. (hmm, it looks like I commented to it already. I thought it looked familiar!!)

Paulette Calasibetta

October 24, 2021 at 2:41 PM

Yes, you did...but twice is nice~LOL. Blessings, Paulette

Deb M

October 23, 2021 at 4:45 AM

So beautiful Paulette. Debx

Delice Arleen Skelly

October 22, 2021 at 11:45 PM

Very nice indeed, well-deserved win...Delice

Constance La France

October 22, 2021 at 3:24 PM

Paulette, lovely couplet poem and congratulations on your win in the contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Janice Canerdy

October 22, 2021 at 3:19 PM

Lovely use of personification, Paulette. CONGRATS on your win! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

October 20, 2021 at 4:43 PM

wow, I can see why this won. Congrats. It's a beauty.

Joe Maverick

October 20, 2021 at 11:14 AM

I find a wistful part in this one It exudes of the change That is ever; as we have known Yet as ever we look at it new.' Well done on the great win Paulette

Malabika Ray Choudhury

October 20, 2021 at 7:00 AM

Congratulations, Paulette, on your win. A marvellous couplet - really enjoyed! Love ~ Mala

Judy Ball

October 19, 2021 at 12:06 PM

Beautifully done Paulette. Congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB

Paulette Calasibetta

October 19, 2021 at 1:41 PM

Judy, Thank you~glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, Paulette

Paula Goldsmith

October 19, 2021 at 10:37 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Autumn Games" is a fun write. Have a blessed autumn day..................

Paulette Calasibetta

October 19, 2021 at 1:43 PM

Thank you Paula, Autumn is 'fun'....nature's most playful time of year. Blessings, Paulette

Harry Horsman

October 18, 2021 at 7:53 PM

Congratulations Paulette, the visual aspect of this poem, is wonderful.

Paulette Calasibetta

October 19, 2021 at 4:47 AM

Hi Harry, Autumn is my favorite time of year, I guess it shows….LOL. Blessings, Paulette

Gershon Wolf

October 18, 2021 at 7:10 PM

Congratulations on your trophy win in Milt's contest, Paulette, with this flowing coupling. Moving and Momentous, gw

Paulette Calasibetta

October 19, 2021 at 4:57 AM

Hi Gershwin, Thank you for commenting so positively about Autumn Games….Autumn is my favorite time of year~ Blessings, Paulette

Susan Ashley

October 18, 2021 at 5:43 PM

Dear Paulette, your vibrant imagery brings me to the center of this scene. Simply beautiful! Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paulette Calasibetta

October 19, 2021 at 4:59 AM

Susan, I am glad I was able to bring you to the center of the scene, a scene I witness through the morning hours of Autumn each day. Blessings, Paulette