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Autumn Games

Shadows dance, playing among the trees They pause, wrestling with the lonesome breeze.... Oct. 17, 20 For: Your best rhyming contest#3 poetry contest Sponsored by: L. Milton Hankins Placed 3rd in contest

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Anne E Sangster - K

Date: 11/16/2021 9:35:00 PM

This is excellent Paulette! I can see the shadows dancing among the trees. A beautiful poem. Cheers Anne :-)

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 11/17/2021 6:54:00 AM

Hi Anne, Thank you for stopping by...glad you enjoyed the visual ~ Blessings, Paulette

John Watt

Date: 10/28/2021 4:21:00 PM

Paulette, I love the movement of your descriptive words, the dancing of the shadows and the wrestling between they do with the breeze. A lovely couplet of a chilly autumn day with a little touch of melancholy. Nicely done!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/28/2021 4:38:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, John. I am so inspired by Autumn~it makes an awesome prompt. Blessings, Paulette

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/24/2021 1:40:00 PM

they seem to have a life of their own lol, lovely couplet my dear, stay beautiful and brilliant, the sun like you that way :)

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/24/2021 2:40:00 PM

Thank you, glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, Paulette

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 10/24/2021 1:39:00 PM

Love that! God bless you. Love, Gina

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/24/2021 2:41:00 PM

Thank you Gina, glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, Paulette

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/24/2021 11:22:00 AM

Wonderful imagery, Paulette. I enjoyed the read.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/24/2021 2:42:00 PM

Vijay, thank you, glad you enjoyed the imagery. Blessings, Paulette

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/23/2021 10:00:00 AM

I see this was a winner. Awesome. Well deserved. (hmm, it looks like I commented to it already. I thought it looked familiar!!)

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/24/2021 2:41:00 PM

Yes, you did...but twice is nice~LOL. Blessings, Paulette

Deb M

Date: 10/23/2021 4:45:00 AM

So beautiful Paulette. Debx

Delice Arleen Skelly

Date: 10/22/2021 11:45:00 PM

Very nice indeed, well-deserved win...Delice

Constance La France

Date: 10/22/2021 3:24:00 PM

Paulette, lovely couplet poem and congratulations on your win in the contest ~ love and serenity _Constance

Janice Canerdy

Date: 10/22/2021 3:19:00 PM

Lovely use of personification, Paulette. CONGRATS on your win! Janice

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/20/2021 4:43:00 PM

wow, I can see why this won. Congrats. It's a beauty.

Joe Maverick

Date: 10/20/2021 11:14:00 AM

I find a wistful part in this one It exudes of the change That is ever; as we have known Yet as ever we look at it new.' Well done on the great win Paulette

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 10/20/2021 7:00:00 AM

Congratulations, Paulette, on your win. A marvellous couplet - really enjoyed! Love ~ Mala

Judy Ball

Date: 10/19/2021 12:06:00 PM

Beautifully done Paulette. Congrats on a well deserved win. God Bless, JB

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/19/2021 1:41:00 PM

Judy, Thank you~glad you enjoyed it. Blessings, Paulette

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/19/2021 10:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. Your "Autumn Games" is a fun write. Have a blessed autumn day..................

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/19/2021 1:43:00 PM

Thank you Paula, Autumn is 'fun'....nature's most playful time of year. Blessings, Paulette

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/18/2021 7:53:00 PM

Congratulations Paulette, the visual aspect of this poem, is wonderful.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/19/2021 4:47:00 AM

Hi Harry, Autumn is my favorite time of year, I guess it shows….LOL. Blessings, Paulette

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/18/2021 7:10:00 PM

Congratulations on your trophy win in Milt's contest, Paulette, with this flowing coupling. Moving and Momentous, gw

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/19/2021 4:57:00 AM

Hi Gershwin, Thank you for commenting so positively about Autumn Games….Autumn is my favorite time of year~ Blessings, Paulette

Susan Ashley

Date: 10/18/2021 5:43:00 PM

Dear Paulette, your vibrant imagery brings me to the center of this scene. Simply beautiful! Congratulations for your excellent win in Milton’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 10/19/2021 4:59:00 AM

Susan, I am glad I was able to bring you to the center of the scene, a scene I witness through the morning hours of Autumn each day. Blessings, Paulette