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Autumn Dance

Aerial dance of falling leaves Unfurl their beauty in the wind Transforming the scene they now perceive Unraveling the colors that dance within My summer love fades with the sun New moon rising, in gold she's spun 9/21/17

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Roy Pett

Date: 9/26/2017 9:41:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved win Joseph, great acrostic. :))

Gary Smith

Date: 9/26/2017 7:25:00 AM

Congrats Joseph :)

Constance La France

Date: 9/26/2017 7:00:00 AM

Joseph, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful autumn acrostic . . .

Eve Roper

Date: 9/25/2017 8:28:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Joseph. Hugs Eve ~`*

Joseph May
Date: 9/26/2017 5:12:00 AM

Thank you Eve

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 9/25/2017 8:17:00 PM

Lovely and creative, Joseph, I enjoyed this very much! Blessings and congrats on your well-deserved win, my friend! :-)

Joseph May
Date: 9/26/2017 5:12:00 AM

Thank you Gregory

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/25/2017 7:55:00 PM

wow, the last two lines are just incredible, Joseph. Short but sweet and a great win. Congrats.

Joseph May
Date: 9/26/2017 5:11:00 AM

Thank you Andrea

Jan Allison

Date: 9/25/2017 6:33:00 PM

a delightful autumnal acrostic Jospeh:-) many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Joseph May
Date: 9/26/2017 5:11:00 AM

Thank you Jan

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/25/2017 6:22:00 PM

Congratulations Joseph for your win! :)

Joseph May
Date: 9/26/2017 5:10:00 AM

Thank you Heidi

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/25/2017 5:14:00 PM

Thank you for entering your GREAT poem in my contest. I was pleased to give it the honor it deserves, Joseph. Janice

Joseph May
Date: 9/25/2017 6:15:00 PM

Thank you so much for my placement Janice..and thanks for the inspiration

Joanna Daniel

Date: 9/22/2017 7:14:00 AM

Lovely, Joseph, especially that last line:)

Joseph May
Date: 9/26/2017 5:09:00 AM

Thank you Jo

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/21/2017 7:55:00 PM

Lovely autumn dance--well written, Joseph!

Joseph May
Date: 9/26/2017 5:09:00 AM

Thank you Vijay

Eve Roper

Date: 9/21/2017 7:30:00 PM

This is a beautiful acrostic, Joseph, the imagery is so very colorful.. Hugs Eve ~`*

Joseph May
Date: 9/26/2017 5:09:00 AM

Thank you Eve

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/21/2017 5:09:00 PM

So beautiful Joseph. What a great Acrostic! A favorite to read again later. Well done :)

Joseph May
Date: 9/21/2017 5:20:00 PM

Thanks for your comments Heidi, and thanks for making it a fave