Vijay Pandit Poet Rhyme

Autumn - Constanza

Colors she wowed in autumn's praise
Where tinted leaves turn fiery red,
Where gamboge dye prairies imbed.

Meadows winsome in crimson blaze
Inspired poems of heartfelt themes
Strumming passions of season's dreams.

Vying glimpse of her moonlit gaze
Resplendent motifs whirled in dance
Pleasing poise of her gifted stance.

Lauding grandeur of gilded glaze
Lyrics she wrote in flawless rhyme,
How Connie's verses transcend time!

Swaying rhythms of beauteous days
Autumn's glory adorned her art:
Words that blossomed poetic heart.

Colors she wowed in autumn's praise~
Meadows winsome in crimson blaze,
Vying glimpse of her moonlit gaze
Lauding grandeur of gilded glaze
Swaying rhythms of beauteous days.

September 24, 2022
Placed1st: In Remembrance of Connie –
Autumn Theme Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Suzanne Delaney
Form: Constanza
Eight syllables per line

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Evelyn Judy Buehler July 2, 2023 at 8:51 AM Vijay, your tribute to Connie is arrestingly lovely. Belated congratulations on your win.

Reason A. Poteet October 31, 2022 at 7:22 AM Your piece brings to mind the divine thought that when we commit our lives back to our Creator - our actions as well as our words continue to glorify Him long after we have joined Him in heaven. That is the beauty of salvation. A model piece, Vijay worthy of the first place it wears. “How Connie’s verses transcend time.”

Valsa George October 21, 2022 at 9:11 PM Hi Vijay, back to your poem with Congratulations on your first place win!

Suzanne Delaney October 21, 2022 at 1:54 PM Thank you, Vijay……for taking part in this tribute to Connie with your wonderful Autumn Constanza. You have captured the essence of Connie, especially in these few lines. “ Swaying rhythms of beauteous days Autumn's glory adorned her art: Words that blossomed poetic heart.”Autumn Blessings, SuZ

Sotto Poet October 21, 2022 at 1:20 PM Back with congratulations, on your contest win dear Vijay. Your poem is a vividly expressive tribute to Connie RIP.

Janice Canerdy September 28, 2022 at 3:35 PM A vividly descriptive, expressive, skillfully composed tribute to Connie, Vijay! Janice

Bj Legros Kelley September 28, 2022 at 1:02 AM This is absolutely beautiful :) I love your poetry my friend <3 Vijay Pandit September 28, 2022 at 8:35 AM Thank you my friend--much appreciate.

Mystic Rose Rose September 27, 2022 at 9:50 PM She is probably smiling from ear to ear with this one Vijay, good luck with the contest, :) Vijay Pandit September 28, 2022 at 8:35 AM May she RIP. Much appreciate your visit--many thanks, Vienna.

Harry Horsman September 27, 2022 at 8:10 PM Oh, this is so good, Vijay Wonderful dedication, stanza 4 is so emotional in a poem that rolls along in 'swaying rhythms of beauteous days' Harry Vijay Pandit September 28, 2022 at 8:34 AM Thank you Harry--much appreciate.

Joseph P. DiMino September 27, 2022 at 7:21 PM She was a great writer/artist; will be missed dearly; "Meadows winsome in crimson blaze Inspired poems of heartfelt themes Strumming passions of season's dreams." Eloquent writing! Vijay Pandit September 28, 2022 at 8:34 AM Thank you Joe--you are always very kind. Much appreciate your visit.

Alexis Y. September 27, 2022 at 8:12 AM WoW! Vijay, This is such a fitting tribute piece to Connie. You did her form justice. She would have loved this. She will be greatly missed. Excellent job. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day, my friend -Alexis Vijay Pandit September 28, 2022 at 8:33 AM So nice to hear from you Alexis. Much appreciate your kind feedback. Many thanks.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 26, 2022 at 1:09 PM - Our dear friend Connie would love this poem, Vijay ... really beautifully written...thank you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Vijay Pandit September 28, 2022 at 8:32 AM Indeed she was a dear friend to us all. Much appreciate, Anne-Lise--many thanks.

Kim Rodrigues September 26, 2022 at 11:57 AM Too be so remembered, Vijay! What a lovely and colorful tribute! Vijay Pandit September 28, 2022 at 8:32 AM Much appreciate Kim--many thanks.

Heidi Sands September 26, 2022 at 6:23 AM This is a perfectly written tribute for a special poet who looks upon this with happiness and appreciation. Well written Vijay :) Vijay Pandit September 28, 2022 at 8:31 AM So nice to hear that from you Heidi. Much appreciate--many thanks.

Mike Gentile September 26, 2022 at 4:03 AM Vijay, your always expressive and meaningful imagery has certainly created a lovely tribute!!! A great week ahead to you !!! Vijay Pandit September 28, 2022 at 8:31 AM Many thanks Mike for your visit and kind feedback.

Andrea Dietrich September 25, 2022 at 8:19 PM This is awesome, Vijay. I am so amazed by all the wonderful constanzas written in her honor. Vijay Pandit September 28, 2022 at 8:30 AM Thank you Andrea--much appreciate.

Bill Baker September 24, 2022 at 10:53 PM Thanks for sharing your thoughts on Connie's poetry in her created form, Vijay. Well written tribute to a fine poetess. Bill Vijay Pandit September 25, 2022 at 1:20 PM I agree--she was special. Much appreciate Bill. Many thanks.

Michael Tor September 24, 2022 at 4:35 PM Vijay Connie is smiling down on you from heaven. You honor her with this lovely tribute and Poetic form of hers. What a gift you have given her and shared with us. I am sure John W. Will love this one from you. I did a favorite my friend. Be blessed Vijay for making this effort in Connies memory... Vijay Pandit September 25, 2022 at 1:19 PM Always a joy to read your comments, Michael. Much appreciate your generous feedback and your FAVE. Thank you for being there and a very special thank you for the FAVE.

Demetrios Trifiatis September 24, 2022 at 1:08 PM A worthy tribute to a great lady with a kind heart and a marvelous poetic soul. You certainly have achieved your goal, my dearest friend, Vijay, by keeping her memory alive with such a glorifying poem. God bless her soul! Vijay Pandit September 24, 2022 at 3:19 PM Much appreciate your kind feedback my dear friend. Always a pleasure when you visit. Many thanks, Demetrios.

Tom Cunningham September 24, 2022 at 11:20 AM Lovely tribute to Connie Vijay she would be proud of your poem written in the form that she created. She will be greatly missed on soup, I came across comments she made to me, still cant believe she's gone from us. Tom Vijay Pandit September 24, 2022 at 12:15 PM I love the form she created. This poem, as you say, is a tribute to her, Tom. So many have written praises and I am sure many more will continue flow through this space. Many thanks for your presence, Tom.

Victor Buhagiar September 24, 2022 at 10:16 AM One cannot but apricate the writings of Connie and also of yours. It is a pity there are so few great poets around. Losing them is a great pity. Your poem is of course in parity with the other great ones. Vijay Pandit September 24, 2022 at 12:12 PM Much appreciate your kind remarks, Victor. You are among the great ones--stay safe, and keep writing. Many thanks.

Sotto Poet September 24, 2022 at 7:16 AM Vijay, this is a beautiful and moving homage that perfectly combines the poet's talent with the splendor of nature in autumn. Coloring it in fall colors is such a sweet way to honor Connie, and I adore how you did it! Thanks for sharing your opinions regarding our friend Connie, and best wishes for the contest. Vijay Pandit September 24, 2022 at 8:21 AM So very kind of you to say so my friend. You always take the time to write detailed remarks and spread goodwill on Soup. Much appreciate your presence. Many thanks, Lasaad.

Sara Kendrick September 24, 2022 at 6:06 AM Ahhh!! Reads like a good contender to me for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your thoughts about Connie. I appreciate the visit to my page and you taking time to comment on my work. Sara Vijay Pandit September 24, 2022 at 8:19 AM Much appreciate your visit and comments, Sara. Glad you stopped by to read this poem honoring Connie. Many thanks.

Valsa George September 24, 2022 at 5:42 AM Such a lovely tribute to Connie coloring it in autumn hues.... a perfect blend of her poetic art wih the art of Nature in Autumn."Lyrics she wrote in flawless rhyme, How Connie's verses transcend time!".... Perfect ! Vijay, all the Best in the contest. Vijay Pandit September 24, 2022 at 8:17 AM You picked out the two lines that speak to Connie's poetic prowess. Much appreciate your thoughtful feedback, Valsa. Many thanks.