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Autumn Affection

Dawn's diamond dew drops delight As cooler autumn air descends Upon the tropical trees in dappled sun Where wild piglets run, free to forage Down below the snows of Mauna Kea Where the rain forests reign supreme, Where bird songs echo during daylight And crickets and coqui frogs chirp in eve's Moonlight as nature's lullabies linger long. Cooler temperatures prevail presenting October skies, a welcome relief from the Summer's humid heat that slows the feet. Autumn serenely shares her halcyon hues In lilting leaves that dance when leaving trees To grace the grounds in a mélange of mounds As her frosty breath awakens soulful zest. 9-13-19 Strand Choice Y Poetry Contest Sponsor Brian Strand ____________________________________________ ~First Place~ Fall Into Fall Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Chantelle Anne Cooke _____________________________________________ ~Second Place~ Contest Name Best free verse Jul-Dec 2019 Sponsor John Hamilton Dec 9, 2019

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Date: 4/4/2020 11:33:00 PM
Your poem is filled with so many wonderful elements - alliteration, beautiful imagery, personification that carry the brightness of this autumn affection! Congratulations Connie!
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Date: 4/4/2020 4:49:00 PM
Connie beautifulwin! Congrats!;)
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Date: 1/1/2020 6:39:00 PM
Beautiful descriptions and lovely alliteration.
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Date: 12/15/2019 3:41:00 PM
Wonderful seeing you on this list, Connie. Can't believe I had not commented to this gem before but maybe I had seen it posted in the club!!
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Date: 12/15/2019 3:41:00 PM
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Date: 12/13/2019 5:12:00 AM
Best wishes and congrats for your win in John's Free Verse contest, Connie - he knows his stuff! Blessings and happy holidays to you and yours! :o) <3
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Date: 12/12/2019 9:15:00 PM
This is lovely, Connie. Great alliteration that flows so naturally - doesn't seem forced at all along with beautiful Hawaiian imagery. I got to spend a month in Hawaii years ago but not in autumn. Now I have a more complete picture! Congratulations!
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Date: 12/11/2019 7:27:00 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Connie
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Date: 12/11/2019 12:07:00 PM
Iconic nature poetry you've written here. But I must comment on the alliteration. I think there are 16 phrases with several three word ones. (I count separated by an article phrases also) This is hard to do but the reward for your music quality in your poem is great! Congratulations on your placement dear poetess.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/11/2019 7:56:00 PM
You are very observant Greg. I appreciate your lovely comment. Thank you very much. Happy holidays! : )
Date: 12/11/2019 10:44:00 AM
Loved this poem Connie, I kind of thought it was you with the Hawaii references, a beautiful nature write, had to win!
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Date: 12/11/2019 7:55:00 PM
Thank you so much for my high placement John. I was happy to see your contest just in time to enter this. Have a lovely holiday! : ) xxoo
Date: 9/24/2019 1:08:00 PM
- A gorgeous winning poems ... congratulations, Connie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/24/2019 10:33:00 AM
Connie congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem !
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Date: 9/23/2019 1:18:00 PM
I love strolling the paths of Hawaii anytime...but I don't think I have been there in the fall. Looks like it will be on the list now. Lovely words to lure me. congrats on your win.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/23/2019 2:15:00 PM
Thank you Jeanne. We are waiting. : ) xxoo
Date: 9/23/2019 7:04:00 AM
A lovely Hawaiian Autumn song. I can hear the echoes of a ukulele. Congratulations Connie. So worth a first place.Love, SuZ
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Date: 9/23/2019 2:14:00 PM
Thank you very much SuZ. I sure miss you being here. It is raining today and I am a happy camper! : ) xxoo
Date: 9/23/2019 1:29:00 AM
Connie back to congratulate you on your win!;)
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Date: 9/23/2019 12:21:00 AM
Congratulations and I knew this would do well. Blessings
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Date: 9/15/2019 6:30:00 PM
this one should do extremely well in the contest, sweet Connie. I also love its title you gave it.
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Date: 9/15/2019 3:45:00 PM
Your words captures the beauty fall -- a relaxed time to breath and laugh! You filled my heart with joy -- though I missed the Moa calling in the morning!!
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Date: 9/22/2019 6:36:00 PM
Are you from New Zealand David? One of my favorite places on Earth. Thank you so much for your beautiful comment. It is much appreciated! : ) xxoo
Date: 9/15/2019 9:37:00 AM
You always create such vivid imagery... lovely poem..
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Date: 9/22/2019 6:44:00 PM
Thank you very much for such a lovely comment Silent. xxoo
Date: 9/14/2019 6:24:00 PM
WoW! Wonderful expression and imagery. An Outstanding piece. Good luck Connie, It's a winner in my book. God Bless, JB
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Date: 9/22/2019 6:37:00 PM
Thank you very much Judy. I adore autumn and love to write poetry extolling her virtues. xxoo
Date: 9/14/2019 6:13:00 PM
Connie this is beautifully written! Good luck in the contest! It's a sure winner in my eyes!;)
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/22/2019 6:39:00 PM
Thank you very much Brenda. It is hard to keep up here at Soup with all the Poetry. I read till my eyes cross. xxoo : )
Date: 9/14/2019 7:36:00 AM
Such beautiful glimpses of autumn in Hawaii, Connie! Your imagery is excellent, as always..and so is your poem..all the best for a TOP win.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/22/2019 6:40:00 PM
Thank you for the good luck, it worked! I appreciate your lovely comments my friend. xxoo
Date: 9/13/2019 9:21:00 PM
This is so lovely. Wishing you a big win and God bless you always.
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Date: 9/22/2019 6:45:00 PM
Thank you Regina...it worked! I appreciate your sweet and thoughtful comment. Blessings xxoo
Date: 9/13/2019 7:50:00 PM
This is so soothing and tranquil; I can hear those frogs croaking. Beautiful.
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/13/2019 7:52:00 PM
They sound like a bird chirping M.L. I hope I can get used to it when I visit in three weeks. Thank you my friend! : ) xxoo
Date: 9/13/2019 7:28:00 PM
your imagery is so lovely Connie I want to get on a plane to see this for myself. love the liberal use of alliteration:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 9/13/2019 7:53:00 PM
I would love a visit from you and Hubble Jan. Thank you very much. : ) xxoo
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