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Autumn

Autumn is awesome in early fall with colors covering over all. Utterly confused by weather changing, the leaf colors always rearranging. This day warm, the next one cold, the wind is mild or else it's bold. Until Autumn gets too close to Winter and very soon Jack Frost will enter. Most of its days grow frigid then, the bear is nestled in her den. Now Autumn packs her vivid hues, leaving only white for Winter's use. Written Sept. 29 for contest.

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Date: 1/3/2015 1:08:00 AM
Beautiful Acrostic poem here Joyce.Enjoyed the read.Wish you a very very Happy New Year.
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Date: 10/12/2014 10:29:00 AM
Loved ur wonderful acrostic Joyce especially the last two the most! White winters wow! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 10/12/2014 1:34:00 AM
Lovely write on autumn with imagery, Joyce, congrats on the win
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Date: 10/11/2014 6:14:00 PM
yes, this one was delightful, and what I really liked was the internal rhyme you used on every line - brilliant! that last line was excellent and clinched it as a winner - congrats on your win in my contest :)
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Date: 10/11/2014 6:03:00 PM
This is one of my favorites, it is absolutely delightful. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 10/11/2014 5:48:00 PM
very nice one, Joyce. So glad to finally see this one while perusing the winners' list. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/11/2014 5:35:00 PM
beautifully penned joyce many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/30/2014 6:46:00 PM
Very beautiful poem Joyce.
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Date: 9/30/2014 10:12:00 AM
Lovely write and nicely done acrostic, Joyce. good luck
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