autumn

autumn fills the air
pretty trees are getting bare
here is the last pear

love warm apple pie
add ice cream before I cry
it is a mile high

flowers are all dead
garden needs to go to bed
spring is now ahead

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Warren Doll

November 7, 2024 at 10:34 AM

Paula, wonderful haiku. I enjoyed it very much~ Warren

Paula Goldsmith

November 7, 2024 at 11:09 AM

Great to see you here. Glad you enjoyed reading my Haiku set of three "autumn" writes. I enjoyed bringing them to life. Have a very blessed/wonderful day writing away........

Sara Kendrick

October 17, 2024 at 2:59 PM

Back with congratulations on your winning work. Way to go. Thanks for sharing your gift with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

October 18, 2024 at 7:56 AM

Great to see you here. Glad you enjoyed reading my Haiku set of three "autumn" writes. I do not think I won on this one. I did get POTD this week. Hope you are OK... Have a very blessed/wonderful day writing away........

Marikate Kingston

October 5, 2024 at 9:49 PM

Your poem is so clever, full of imagery and feels like a nature hug somehow. Oh, I simply loved it. Autumn is fun to write about, especially in a sensory way :) It would be nice to illustrate your poem.

Paula Goldsmith

October 6, 2024 at 8:42 AM

Great to see you here. Glad you found my Haiku set of three "autumn" writes to be so clever. Fall is a beautiful time of the year. I wish it would last longer. Have a very blessed/wonderful day writing away...............

Karen Croft

September 30, 2024 at 6:00 AM

Beautiful fall haiku! Have a great day!

Paula Goldsmith

October 1, 2024 at 12:31 PM

Great to see you here. Glad you found my Haiku set of three "autumn" writes to be a Beautiful fall haiku. It is a great of the year. Have a very blessed/wonderful day writing away...............

Jay Narain

September 25, 2024 at 10:51 AM

Nice poem. Spring will come after the cold winter.

Paula Goldsmith

September 26, 2024 at 11:36 AM

Great to see you here. Glad you enjoyed reading my Haiku set of three "autumn" writes. I loved writing about the warm apple pie with some ice cream on top. So Delicious... Have a very blessed/wonderful day writing away........

Hilda Greenhough

September 24, 2024 at 8:26 PM

This is beautiful. I really got caught up with "the last pear". I'll miss the fresh fruit.

Paula Goldsmith

September 25, 2024 at 9:36 AM

Great to see you here. Glad you found my Haiku set of three "autumn" writes to be beautiful. I think summer has the best fresh fruits. I do love the fall apples. Each season brings in something new. Have a very blessed/wonderful day writing away...............

John Read

September 24, 2024 at 12:37 PM

Warm apple pie and ice cream sounds delicious Paula.

Paula Goldsmith

September 24, 2024 at 12:55 PM

Great to see you here. Glad you enjoyed reading my Haiku set of three "autumn" writes. Oh yes, I love warm apple pie with some ice cream on top. So Delicious... Maybe for one of the holidays. Have a very blessed/wonderful day writing away........

Suzanne Delaney

September 24, 2024 at 10:29 AM

Hi Paula: Lovely little vie-nets of fall. I would love some of that apple pie. My little faerie garden will be packed up soon. On their box I write, "Sleeping until spring. Have a magical fall. SuZ

Paula Goldsmith

September 24, 2024 at 11:12 AM

Great to see you here. Glad you enjoyed reading my Haiku set of three "autumn" writes. Oh yes, I would love some warm apple pie with some ice cream on top. Maybe for one of the holidays. Gardens must now go to sleep until spring comes back around. Have a great fall time as you write away................

Valsa George

September 23, 2024 at 9:30 PM

Enjoyed this beautifully rhyming set of haikus. All the characteristics of autumn find a place in your haikus. All the best dear Paula. Love and hugs...

Paula Goldsmith

September 24, 2024 at 11:05 AM

Great to see you here. Glad you enjoyed reading my Haiku set of three "autumn" rhyming writes. What a lovely time of the year.Hugs... Have a great/blessed day writing away................

Andrea Dietrich

September 22, 2024 at 12:43 PM

Cute rhyming set, Paula.

Paula Goldsmith

September 24, 2024 at 11:02 AM

Great to see you here. Glad you found my Haiku set of three "autumn" writes to be a Cute rhyming set. Have a great/blessed day writing away................

Ink Empress

September 22, 2024 at 8:28 AM

Dear paula youv written such beautiful haiku here woven seamlessly with such descriptive lines! I especially love “ flowers are all dead garden needs to go to bed spring is now ahead” wow! So fitting for autumn! You did an exquisite job! Pleasure reading this gem! Best wishes. Sending you light always

Paula Goldsmith

September 22, 2024 at 9:36 AM

Great to see you here. Thanks for your best wishes. Glad you enjoyed reading my three Haiku "autumn" writes. Thanks for your kind words. You always know what to say. I love this pretty time of the year before everything goes to bed for the winter. Have a blessed day writing away............

Karen Jones

September 22, 2024 at 2:59 AM

Fun string of fall haikus! Enjoyed reading! Have a great Sunday!

Paula Goldsmith

September 22, 2024 at 9:32 AM

Great to see you here. Glad you enjoyed reading my Haiku set of three "autumn" writes. A great time of the year. Have a great Sunday/blessed day writing away................

Evelyn Judy Buehler

September 21, 2024 at 10:06 PM

This is a beautiful set of haikus, Paula! So timely and enjoyable. Love the imagery! Best wishes.

Paula Goldsmith

September 22, 2024 at 9:29 AM

Great to see you here. Thanks for your best wishes. Glad you found my "autumn" write to be a beautiful set of haikus. I love the leaves with their pretty colors of red, yellow, orange. Have a blessed day writing away............

nastyolives blegh

September 21, 2024 at 2:43 PM

Lovely haiku, pleasure reading

Paula Goldsmith

September 22, 2024 at 9:20 AM

Great to see you here. Glad you loved reading my Haiku "autumn" writes. I love this time of the year. These were fun to write. Have a blessed day writing away..........

Sara Kendrick

September 21, 2024 at 2:23 PM

A season of rest for all of nature and mankind before everything resurrects. Thanks for sharing your mora with us. Sara K

Paula Goldsmith

September 22, 2024 at 9:18 AM

Great to see you here. Glad you enjoyed reading my "autumn" write. Yes, a long rest before spring comes with all new. I love this time of the year. Have a blessed day writing away...........

Daniel Henry Rodgers

September 21, 2024 at 2:01 PM

Dear Paula, I always love reading great Haikus and yours is one of them. I do love the Autumn the best but I also know spring brings new life! Loved reading! - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Paula Goldsmith

September 22, 2024 at 9:16 AM

Great to see you here. Glad you loved reading my Haiku "autumn" writes. I love this time of the year also spring. Two great times of the year. Have a blessed day writing away......

Len Gasun

September 21, 2024 at 10:38 AM

Wow! This is so beautiful and creative autumn haiku my dearest poet friend Paula. I love every set's image and melancholic beauty. Although we don't really experience autumn here I experience it vicariously through reading especially from your very creative work. I also wrote for this contest and I've mentioned the next season winter. I hope I'm right? Thank you so much for sharing and all the best in the contest. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Paula Goldsmith

September 22, 2024 at 9:11 AM

Great to see you here. Thanks for your all the best in the contest. Glad you loved reading my three Haiku sets "autumn" writes. The leaves are pretty colors of red, yellow, orange. I love this time of the year. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away.............

Tom Cunningham

September 21, 2024 at 9:10 AM

Spring can't come quick enough Paula, just winter between us. Hope you're keeping well, just back from Spain. Tom

Paula Goldsmith

September 21, 2024 at 10:20 AM

Great to see you here. Glad you enjoyed reading my "autumn" write. I love this time of the year. I am well, thanks for asking. Hope you had a wonderful time in Spain. Sounds like fun. Have a blessed day writing away.

Paula Goldsmith

September 21, 2024 at 8:35 AM

Autumn~Date Written: 9/21/2024

autumn

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