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For the Than-Bauk Variation Poetry Contest of Kim Rodrigues

Autumn, you fall like soft feathers that float on air

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David Crandall

Date: 9/22/2024 2:46:00 PM

Pretty, Andrea!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/22/2024 12:15:00 PM

bravo to you for a no.1 win, andie...take a bow!

Terry Flood

Date: 9/20/2024 2:45:00 PM

Enjoyed both the ‘feathers’ simile and your clever use of ‘fall’ with regard to autumn but not actually meaning autumn. Congrats on your worthy win. Terry

Ink Empress

Date: 9/19/2024 2:03:00 PM

Dear sweet andrea, How did i miss this one! It’s absolutely stunning and flows so well with such exquisite imagery in few syllable! Well deserved win really! Congratulations! I loved it

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 9/18/2024 9:23:00 AM

Congratulations are due - love the juxtaposition of feathers and leaves. Well done word play on autumn and fall too.

Janice Canerdy

Date: 9/18/2024 7:30:00 AM

A huge CONGRATS, Andrea. I love your simile. Janice

thriveni c mysore

Date: 9/17/2024 9:53:00 PM

congratulations dear poet.

Karen Croft

Date: 9/17/2024 8:31:00 PM

Congratulations - beautiful

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/17/2024 5:46:00 PM

Pretty Imagery! Congratulations, Andrea!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/7/2024 5:54:00 PM

how this floats like autumn air, andie: oh so fine... I changed my last line though I thought one word with 2 syls is proper...thanks and huggs...hope to talk with you soon!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/3/2024 2:58:00 PM

Autumn, is very pleasant here today. I like your Than-Bauk. I am wondering though which variation. Thanks for sharing your contest entry with us. Sara K..I looked it up and I see which variation.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/3/2024 9:39:00 PM

The way I understand the variation is to use the sound found in first line's last word's letter , which is F. So line 2 the third syllable starts with F and in last line the second syllable starts with F