Auto writing Ghazal

The calendar date, red-inked into alpine
white vellum: a blood-letting, a quilled line.

Old ducks [politically incorrect] featherless,
waddling like myself, fall neatly into line.

"It is time," I say to my left-brain, my right-
hand, "to auto write a poem in couplet line."

In my excitement I look toward newborn
paper and begin reworking the previous line.

My face soften, my fingers relax.  Another
deception blotted off the eternal timeline.

Time marches on ... or, onward and upward!
"Upward?" the poet asks.  "Oh, what a line!"
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Jones Avatar
January 10, 2025 at 10:31 PM
Clever write! I can honestly say this form I do not know how to do lol!
Tor Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 6:18 AM
Interesting theme MH. I sometimes have to wait till I am inspired to write instead of forcing myself to do so. Thanks for sharing hoping you are well and writing away. Blessings...
Harp Avatar
January 2, 2025 at 7:27 AM
Thank you, Michael, for appreciating my poem. Blessings and happy writing!
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