Aura of October

Sated with savor sown in a summer past
   musings are mulled with soft cider flavor
whilst caramel leaves harvest eve’s rose hip rays —

and like the wild asters 
   wearing the flame and fade of twilight hues
      I moon ‘neath Orion’s garden 
         midst stars falling from comet’s bloom


Susan Ashley
October 5, 2019


Poet’s note: the Orionid meteor showers, considered to be one of the most beautiful showers of the year, peaks in mid-October and are caused by debris from Halley’s comet. Each time the famous comet passes around the Sun, it leaves in its wake a trail of cosmic dust and grit along its orbit (shooting/falling stars). The Orionids are so-called because the point from which they appear to originate, called the radiant, lies in the constellation Orion, but they can be seen over a large area of the sky.
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Date: 3/12/2020 12:14:00 PM
Beautiful...and I'll be swooning in the aura of these inspired lines, Susan. Excellent use of free verse, where alliteration makes its presence felt without being overpowering. ~ Warm regards ang hugs // paul
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Date: 3/13/2020 9:35:00 AM
Dearest Paul, I truly appreciate your presence here and your beautiful comments. You never fail to make my day, my inspiring friend.. thank you. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan
Date: 10/28/2019 4:32:00 AM
Oh sissy so very beautiful! Wow! You and bro Bro are the best family anyone could ever want!;) plus I love his story for puff puff and all are in it! Wait a minute was bro bro in it? Hummmm I think I best go recheck because I just don't remember! But my dear sissy you are amazing g as always and still bring a insane smile to my face! Thank you sissy!;) All my love!;) Dragon fire!;)
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Date: 11/2/2019 8:45:00 AM
My dear sissy, it touches my heart to know that my poetry brings an insane smile to your wonderful face... that's what sissy's are for, and for sure we make each other smile..! I love our bro bro's puff puff series, he is such an create genius.. poetic talent must run in the family.. lol.. but I think you and our bro got the most of it, my dear Dragon Fire. Give Puff a hug from her auntie Illum and we must plan a party in the totem soon!! :)) Love and hugs, your on-the-edge-of-saneness sissy <3
Date: 10/14/2019 1:04:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful Susan! So well written :)
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Date: 10/14/2019 6:10:00 PM
Heidi, thank you for gracing my poem with your lovely presence and precious comments, both are so appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 10/11/2019 10:45:00 AM
Galactic imagery in this superbly crafted piece my dear friend. Another exquisite example of your immense and very deep poetic talents! As a rose in bloom, its colors gleaming bright. As in Nature's groom, a bride 's delight. From Heavenly skies, radiance beheld. Glittering of gems in a poetic meld. A fav, an enchantingly deep beauty..
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Date: 10/11/2019 12:04:00 PM
My dear friend, your comments are enchanting. You have a genuine poet's soul, Robert, one that inspires and is inspired, in equal measure, for the love of poetry. Thank you for your poetic friendship and for your esteemed thoughts, dear poet. I am indeed humbled by your appreciation and fav. Warmest wishes my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 10/7/2019 9:56:00 PM
I Agree with S.O below, been on soup 10 years now, seen and witness lots, but every now and then, something so special graces this poetry site. I need to say no more, just enjoy, the enjoyment you give with your elegant mind.
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Date: 10/11/2019 10:48:00 AM
Harry, your beautiful and elegant comments move me deeply. I am humbled by your appreciation and honored by your touching sentiments. Thank you for your gracious and lovely visit that lifts my heart with elation. I’m so proud and pleased that you enjoyed my poem, dear poet. Warmest wishes always, my friend.. ~Susan
Date: 10/7/2019 2:57:00 PM
The imagery in this is brilliant, sometimes i wonder how we can describe things differently, but you do it so easily with your extended vocabulary...
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Date: 10/10/2019 6:45:00 PM
Indeed, Silent One! The imagination’s capabilities are endless, as your beautiful poetic artistry aptly shows. Thank you for your inspiring comments, my dear friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 10/7/2019 10:45:00 AM
Starry taste of the season. I bet Caren will enjoy it. I do. P.S.: Hi, Susan, long time no see)
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Date: 10/10/2019 1:43:00 PM
Indeed, my friend.. it's wonderful to see you. I have missed being here and I've especially missed your wondrous poetry. I hope to be back on a more regular basis soon.. Thank you, Kurt, for your tasty comment on this little poetic morsel. Warmest wishes always, dear poet.. ~Susan
Date: 10/7/2019 8:43:00 AM
Wonderful writing Susan I love your word pairing gives it a tinge of uniqueness which is appealing eg wild asters wearing flame, sooo good!
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Date: 10/10/2019 1:41:00 PM
John, your inspiration is beyond compare. I relish your uplifting and encouraging comments, my talented friend. You are ever appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 10/7/2019 7:00:00 AM
Thank you. October is my favorite month, and as I read your poetry I am saying "YES, what she said!" Caramel leaves oh how yum. You are more than poet Susan!
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Date: 10/10/2019 1:39:00 PM
Ah, yes, September and October are my two favorite months, P.S. I relish your delish response to my poem and I just want you to know that you absolutely made my day! Thank you, dear poet and wonderful friend, for your generous kindness. I hope to be back on a regular basis soon and catch up on your beautiful poetry, dear friend. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 10/6/2019 8:47:00 PM
Sensational flavor and imagery!
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Date: 10/10/2019 1:35:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! Your lovely comments are appreciated. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Date: 10/6/2019 4:36:00 PM
"I moon ‘neath Orion’s garden midst stars falling in comet’s bloom." Galactic imagery....really nice...with caramel leaves falling...Enjoyed it...All the best
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Date: 10/10/2019 1:34:00 PM
Thank you, Arturo, for your sharing beautiful thoughts with me. You are ever appreciated, mon ami. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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