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August Snow

All night sweating under a skin-wet sheet. Fevered fantasies of skinny dipping in a kiddy paddling pool, toes as sticky as denture gum. it’s broiling August. Cold showers frazil with soapy earth-baked splashes. There’s a place to go where they sell snow - it’s a drug store, where they deal in root beer floats, numb-numbs; an ice-cream brain freeze. It helps. Of course, in steamy September when the sweat on your nose flows upward into parched eyes a chilled Lime Phosphate is the only cure.

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Date: 8/12/2019 9:21:00 AM
Great to get feedback on this light-hearted ditty. Cheers Richard!
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Date: 8/12/2019 9:07:00 AM
This is refreshingly unique.
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Date: 8/10/2019 12:32:00 PM
Lol. yep, old timey drinks. Thanks for the heads up on Blurberry sluch.
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Date: 8/10/2019 11:32:00 AM
Wonderful way to cool down. Give me a blueberry slush or ice cone walking down the streets of Old Baltimore.
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