August Snow

All night sweating under a skin-wet sheet. 
Fevered fantasies of skinny dipping
in a kiddy paddling pool,
toes as sticky as denture gum.

it’s broiling August.
Cold showers frazil 
with soapy earth-baked splashes.

There’s a place to go
where they sell snow -
it’s a drug store, where they deal
in root beer floats, numb-numbs;
an ice-cream brain freeze. It helps.

Of course, in steamy September
when the sweat on your nose
flows upward
into parched eyes
 
a chilled Lime Phosphate
is the only cure.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Ashford Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 9:21 AM
Great to get feedback on this light-hearted ditty. Cheers Richard!
Lamoureux Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 9:07 AM
This is refreshingly unique.
Ashford Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 12:32 PM
Lol. yep, old timey drinks. Thanks for the heads up on Blurberry sluch.
Babbit Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 11:32 AM
Wonderful way to cool down. Give me a blueberry slush or ice cone walking down the streets of Old Baltimore.
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