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Attacked By a Cabinet Door

Bonk On head. Raised too quick!. Saw a bright star.! Shock! Wife In tears Laughing hard Because of look! CUTE! Me In pain Tears in eyes. Wanting to cry! Cuss!!!! (Note: CUTE is supposed to be sarcastic!! This happened last week...10/07/09 And I didn't "cuss" LOL Most everyone's been there!!!!!!!

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Colleen Bono

Date: 12/2/2009 4:24:00 PM

I am glad I read this one.I almost had tears in my eyes from laughing.I got a visual on that. To funny.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 10/28/2009 1:43:00 AM

Bonk!...Hilarious, Marty! - Tim

Audrey Haick

Date: 10/21/2009 2:30:00 PM

I can't believe I missed this! Ouch! Sorry, but it happens to all of us sooner or later. Peace and love, Audrey

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 10/19/2009 9:14:00 PM

Definitely something that one could relate to, enjoyed your write! Thanks for your kind comments on my write :)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/18/2009 9:17:00 AM

Very witty write, Marty! Surely, we have all experienced this type of accideng and seen the "bright stars." I'm sure your wife found it humorous, and apparently you can now look back on the experience and laugh as well. Really enjoyed this one! Love, Carolyn

Donna Golden

Date: 10/17/2009 11:47:00 PM

Recently I bumped my head on one side, then later that same day, I bumped the other side! Argh! So, yes, been there more times than I can count. Hugs, Donna

Joyce Johnson

Date: 10/16/2009 7:03:00 PM

Yes I have been there and I never learn that the cabinet doors should be closed before bending over the dish washer. Cute. Joyce

Robin L. Gass

Date: 10/16/2009 2:12:00 PM

This is a delightful read, Marty! Yes, I think we all have been there and can commiserate! Well done! Thanks for the chuckle! Love, Robin

Robert Davidson

Date: 10/16/2009 11:54:00 AM

yep been there. This is fun. Thanks for your very kind comments on my poem. Robert

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 10/16/2009 11:16:00 AM

Good job, Martin. I can relate to this. This poem is the essence of the comedy of one of the great comedy teams-the Three Stooges. ( And where are they all today,eh? You can name them all and so can I. Stan and Ollie, The Marxes, Bud and Lou. All gone and we ARE NOT the better for it.) But that's another topic. Thank you for your kind remarks. I appreciate it. Regards Gerard.

Brian Strand

Date: 10/15/2009 11:50:00 PM

Indeed Marty you have capyured the 'feelings' well.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words today.

Constance La France

Date: 10/15/2009 7:21:00 PM

A cute poem... made me laugh.. and thanks for the comment on my concrete shape poem... yes, I did work for many hours to get it right...

Date: 10/15/2009 2:47:00 PM

Got a chuckle out the title and just had to read the poem. Good use of humor. Enjoyed it. Keep on writing! Karen

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/15/2009 12:53:00 PM

sure have...if you like funny try Sweet Things.../ or Swine Flue Cha choo! thanks for the laugh Light & Love

Elaine George

Date: 10/15/2009 9:32:00 AM

Yes! I've been there - done that. Almost impossible not to cuss. lol. Love, Lainie

Danny Nunn

Date: 10/15/2009 8:30:00 AM

I have done this, every morning at 5 getting the first cup of coffee!!!! good write....thanks for the comments on the poems..Danny

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/15/2009 6:18:00 AM

Those cabinet doors are attack trained. I have a ceiling fan in a small kitchen. If I open one cabinet door when it is on the door gets attacked just that one. I can see the scene wife laughing and you well, well. LOL. Hope no permanent damage done. Keep writing. Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/15/2009 5:45:00 AM

Still laughing. Thank you for the smiles this morning. Love, Carol

Moonbee Canady

Date: 10/14/2009 7:54:00 PM

Haaaa, Heeeee, Haaaa, Hey... Why is it we find other People's Painful-Clutz, Funny ? (not me of course - Haaaaa, Heeee, Haaaa) .... Loved This One ... MoonBee

Joshua Lacey

Date: 10/14/2009 4:00:00 PM

sure have been there!! :)