Attacked By a Cabinet Door

Bonk
On head.
Raised too quick!.
Saw a bright star.!
Shock!

Wife
In tears
Laughing hard
Because of look!
CUTE!

Me
In pain
Tears in eyes.
Wanting to cry!
Cuss!!!!


(Note:   CUTE is supposed to be sarcastic!!  This happened last week...10/07/09  And I 
didn't "cuss"  LOL Most everyone's been there!!!!!!!
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Bono Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 4:24 PM
I am glad I read this one.I almost had tears in my eyes from laughing.I got a visual on that. To funny.
Ryerson Avatar
October 28, 2009 at 1:43 AM
Bonk!...Hilarious, Marty! - Tim
Haick Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 2:30 PM
I can't believe I missed this! Ouch! Sorry, but it happens to all of us sooner or later. Peace and love, Audrey
K. Avatar
October 19, 2009 at 9:14 PM
Definitely something that one could relate to, enjoyed your write! Thanks for your kind comments on my write :)
Devonshire Avatar
October 18, 2009 at 9:17 AM
Very witty write, Marty! Surely, we have all experienced this type of accideng and seen the "bright stars." I'm sure your wife found it humorous, and apparently you can now look back on the experience and laugh as well. Really enjoyed this one! Love, Carolyn
Golden Avatar
October 17, 2009 at 11:47 PM
Recently I bumped my head on one side, then later that same day, I bumped the other side! Argh! So, yes, been there more times than I can count. Hugs, Donna
Johnson Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 7:03 PM
Yes I have been there and I never learn that the cabinet doors should be closed before bending over the dish washer. Cute. Joyce
Gass Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 2:12 PM
This is a delightful read, Marty! Yes, I think we all have been there and can commiserate! Well done! Thanks for the chuckle! Love, Robin
Davidson Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 11:54 AM
yep been there. This is fun. Thanks for your very kind comments on my poem. Robert
Keogh Jr. Avatar
October 16, 2009 at 11:16 AM
Good job, Martin. I can relate to this. This poem is the essence of the comedy of one of the great comedy teams-the Three Stooges. ( And where are they all today,eh? You can name them all and so can I. Stan and Ollie, The Marxes, Bud and Lou. All gone and we ARE NOT the better for it.) But that's another topic. Thank you for your kind remarks. I appreciate it. Regards Gerard.
Strand Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 11:50 PM
Indeed Marty you have capyured the 'feelings' well.Rgds Brian & thanks for your kind words today.
La France Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 7:21 PM
A cute poem... made me laugh.. and thanks for the comment on my concrete shape poem... yes, I did work for many hours to get it right...
 Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 2:47 PM
Got a chuckle out the title and just had to read the poem. Good use of humor. Enjoyed it. Keep on writing! Karen
Guzzi Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 12:53 PM
sure have...if you like funny try Sweet Things.../ or Swine Flue Cha choo! thanks for the laugh Light & Love
George   Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 9:32 AM
Yes! I've been there - done that. Almost impossible not to cuss. lol. Love, Lainie
Nunn Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 8:30 AM
I have done this, every morning at 5 getting the first cup of coffee!!!! good write....thanks for the comments on the poems..Danny
Kendrick Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 6:18 AM
Those cabinet doors are attack trained. I have a ceiling fan in a small kitchen. If I open one cabinet door when it is on the door gets attacked just that one. I can see the scene wife laughing and you well, well. LOL. Hope no permanent damage done. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
October 15, 2009 at 5:45 AM
Still laughing. Thank you for the smiles this morning. Love, Carol
Canady Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 7:54 PM
Haaaa, Heeeee, Haaaa, Hey... Why is it we find other People's Painful-Clutz, Funny ? (not me of course - Haaaaa, Heeee, Haaaa) .... Loved This One ... MoonBee
Lacey Avatar
October 14, 2009 at 4:00 PM
sure have been there!! :)
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