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Sunblood splashed on celestial canvas Daytime answers drain away Into the throes of unknown night To penetrate her hope with pinion's teeth Her lissome pride humbled by His honor laid at her feet Her lips too quick to besmirch His offering of sacrifice Her sojourn beneath the arch Of firmament's eternity Under a thousand eyes, A thousand thoughts, A thousand words, For one apology Until the dawn's mercy Brings repose to her atonement In the journey to forgiveness There is more than one way home. 5/29/18

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Date: 6/9/2018 10:22:00 PM
Well done, Michelle. Congrats on your top win.
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/25/2018 1:44:00 PM
Appreciate that, thank you, Line!
Date: 6/4/2018 11:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this heartfelt poem that made my heart feel. :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/25/2018 1:45:00 PM
So glad you enjoyed it, Susan!
Date: 6/4/2018 7:37:00 PM
Great use of the 8 words and,Michelle , with great imagery ; congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 7/25/2018 1:45:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!
Date: 6/4/2018 11:34:00 AM
Congratulations for your win Michelle :)
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/4/2018 2:25:00 PM
Thank you so much, Heidi!
Date: 6/4/2018 11:02:00 AM
Another excellent write Michelle, I am becoming a true fan, congrats on another win!
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 6/4/2018 2:26:00 PM
So appreciate your kind words, thank you, John!
Date: 5/29/2018 8:46:00 PM
Michelle, I am awestruck by this poem. It is remarkable. A real winner. Bravo! :) gw
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Michelle Faulkner
Date: 5/30/2018 2:17:00 PM
Thanks, appreciate your thoughtful words!

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