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ATLANTIC OCEAN

"Though her visuals, depths and span have been prominent in my life's story, I am sure the Atlantic sea has never thought of me." ... CayCay Godwin


I was in the oven when I first crossed
over that vast ocean sky high above
her on a plane to Germany where I was born. 
      At age three a ship upon the Atlantic sea
      sailed me to America, my home country which
      was foreign land to me.  At age
             thirteen I was lent a dream, a sponsor
             paid my way on a tour for chaperoned teens of
             four European countries.  Flying at that age,
             I finally, truly saw the sea's awe.
             In Amsterdam mist I was first kissed, a feel so
             robust a romance mostly by
             mail prevailed for a decade plus.
                    After high school, I pooled goodbye tears when,
                    again, my dad was sent to Germany
                    and with my sis and mom went overseas.
                    I flew across the Atlantic and back three times
                    for Christmas love, hugs and kisses.
From Cape Cod to the Keys, I have played in her waves.
My life told includes the Atlantic's role.
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Anaya Avatar
December 3, 2025 at 1:33 PM
Congratulations on your winning thoughts! Loved it, came back. ')
Kendrick Avatar
December 2, 2025 at 3:06 PM
Congratulations on your winning work in Constance's contest. Great information about an ocean of your choice. Way to go. Sara K
George Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 7:57 PM
Your first hand and intimately personal experience of flying over the Atlantic and sailing across the ocean make it an interesting read. Seeing the ocean at the tender age of three must have left some indelible impressions in you. A lovely read, dear Cay cay. Congratulations on your great win. Love your quote.
Goldsmith Avatar
December 1, 2025 at 11:14 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your lovely/wonderful ~ write/story again. The water looks so inviting. Have a blessed day with your win............
Poet Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 12:11 PM
Back with hearty congratulations on your contest win with this fantastic poetry, CayCay.
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2025 at 11:41 AM
Congrats, dear friend. I am on day 2 traveling home. Joe fell in snow yesterday and needed to rest at my sisters house. Otherwise we'd be nearly home right now. Instead we are 3 hours till Cheyenne. We need a good motel . The last one was the dumps!
Anaya Avatar
November 27, 2025 at 12:22 PM
CayCay, i'm swimming in your quote with love, emotive. Remote romances letters of love, I live vicariously through you, a journey cherished, danke. Fab Bio vignette. Frohes Thanksgiving!
Wolf Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 9:02 PM
I say that you are very S-Pacific about the Atlantic being your ocean... Isn't this a stupid comment?... Oh, well... Some nights ya got it; other nights --- not so much.
Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 7:24 PM
Caycay this is such an original and clever way to do the prompt. You sure know how to think outside the box, and I see your hand must be good now with all the comments you are making. I think the best thing you came up with here is that quote. It is really eloquent and deep. Soupmail.
Poet Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 11:16 AM
Your poem is so well-crafted with a strong narrative and emotional impact. It excels in terms of technical skill and emotional resonance. The personal touch of the story evokes empathy and connection. The final line, "My life told includes the Atlantic's role," ties together your personal story and the ocean's significance, leaving a lasting impression. Best for a win
Goldsmith Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 10:43 AM
WOW!!! What a lovely/wonderful ~ write/story you have here. I really enjoyed reading. Great/Pretty Picture... "Good Luck" We both did this one. Have a lovely day writing away............
Rodrigues Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 6:01 AM
A beautiful write! I think this will be a winner! It is for me! Hugs. Fave
Godwin Avatar
November 25, 2025 at 7:57 AM
Thank you for the fav, Kim - most sweet and very appreciated. Still sending out healing thoughts for you. CayCay
Jones Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 6:21 PM
Wow! You have quite a life story with the Atlantic! I enjoyed learning about you! You have persevered despite the challenges and stand as an example of courage. Bravo! Good luck in the contest! Yours is a heart felt non fiction triumph!
Hind Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:30 PM
Great of you to put some of your own input here!! Yes, could not stay away from the soup, I was lonely and unhappy. Thanks for the comments. I am going to read more- <3
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
November 24, 2025 at 5:12 PM
A personal narrative of a life centered on the Atlantic Ocean, as an immigrant from Germany to America as a child, followed by a return to Europe as a teen, and a life that has been shaped by flying, love, and sea occasions from Cape Cod to the Florida Keys. The story underlines a life with constant transatlantic travel, from being shipped to the United States as a toddler to later flying between continents for family, romance, and Christmas.  The role of the Atlantic Ocean in one’s life, linking migration, family, love, and travel across many decades.
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