At the Speed of Life

I sat down and watched
mans great consuming need
He moved quickly towards the nothing
For nothing could satisfy him
those things he had grasped for 
became dust within his hands

I wondered within my silence
Who he had been
before he too turned to dust
My choice was not to forget him
for amongst his moments 
there were pearls 
Those smiles and kisses
he failed to collect

I listened to the music he was unable to hear
Inhaled the fragrance of the beauty he had relinquished 
Bathed myself in the light of magnificent sunsets
There in my stationary position
I moved at the speed of life

Within his experiences 
I felt the loss of his possibilities
causing a single tear to drip down my face
It grew, forming into a lake
Upon the lake I floated with my thoughts
until I panicked 
For I thought I would drown
sink beneath my own questioning
Where would I travel next
now that man had disappeared
A hand reached for me 
from above the surface of the water
so I grasped for more
Holding onto my great need
I felt God lift me
until I gazed upon His face
He smiled at me and my brothers
For despite our flaws  
We had not been forsaken!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Onclaud Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 12:38 PM
what an uplifting verse with eloquent lines, rich... yes, we are never forsaken!... huggs
Lamoureux Avatar
May 3, 2016 at 3:16 PM
Hugs back Nette, thanks for visiting.
La France Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 4:36 PM
Richard, this is excellent and so beautifully penned, I am loving this 7 ~
Lamoureux Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 10:08 PM
Thanks Constance!;0)
Nau Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 3:05 PM
Reminds me of the movie with Carry Grant, "People Will Talk" one of my favorites. Dr. Noah Praetorius is standing over a cadaver telling his students about all the things that the deceased was in life & that they would NEVER find with years of dissection! Love the metaphor to salvation here. Otherwise life will set one into existential depression. Wonderfully done!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 10:09 PM
Thanks for the great comment Edlynn.
Trifiatis Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 7:49 AM
God always lift us but we have to learn ourselves not to fall! Inspiring writing with a very stern warning, my friend, Richard!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 8:12 AM
Thanks for visiting Demetrios.
Manassian Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 2:52 AM
How lovely. You really make the reader think about the meaning of life. Your talent amazes me....loved the line in which you incorporated your title. Great job
Lamoureux Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 7:17 AM
Thanks Eileen, I'm pleased you enjoyed it.
Dietrich Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 9:00 PM
Profound and powerful. this is amazing, Richard. Gotta fave it!!
Lamoureux Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 7:16 AM
Thanks for faving it Andrea.
Inman Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 10:06 AM
Deep very well written poem Richard.
Lamoureux Avatar
May 2, 2016 at 7:16 AM
Thanks James.
Vaso Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 11:27 PM
At a loss for words, as you have used them all here, and very well! :) The title goes so well with this poem! :) A7
Lamoureux Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 7:48 AM
Thanks Arthur, sorry for using up so many words. ;0)
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 7:36 PM
Wow Richard, this is an impressive work! What great lines such as: "There in my stationary position I moved at the speed of life". I really loved this work of art! #7 ; )
Lamoureux Avatar
May 1, 2016 at 7:50 AM
You are kind Connie, thanks for visiting.
Emu Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 3:47 PM
Brings a smile to the soul Richard, enjoyed this very much. Kind regards, Craig
Lamoureux Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 6:20 PM
Thanks Craig. ;0)
Hamilton Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 12:35 PM
Very nicely written very profound, I always enjoy your work, it is always well put together, subtle spirituality, filling the void most humans feel without understanding their place in God's purpose.A7
Lamoureux Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 2:09 PM
Thanks John.
A   Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 10:48 AM
Richard, thanks for the uplifting read and thoughts. I mean I was not expecting the end to be a feeling, I've closed my eyes too... Love LINDA
Lamoureux Avatar
April 30, 2016 at 2:09 PM
Thanks Linda, I'm glad you were surprised.
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