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At the Shady Inn

Thus we came and went in the quaking dawn. Puppets on a string caught up in this game. Reckon we will burn. Bind my soul then. My hands are soiled dirty work done. Yet it feels right. I love you sounds so trite in this doom. Back door. Shade's drawn at noon. Fools.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 6/29/2013 7:30:00 PM
I love the form you have used to tell this story...It is a perfect fit....SuZ
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Date: 3/27/2013 4:50:00 AM
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Date: 3/26/2013 11:01:00 PM
That seems like the perfect poem a a night campfire gathering. Thanks for the read.
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