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Sorry if I missed afew in Soup Creek...I'll get ya'll next time :)

At the Rendezvous In Soup Creek

One day in Soup Creek City, 
There was a duel 'tween Cunningham and Watt 
Tom said to John "I hear you're good, 
Let me see, son- what you've got" 

John said to Tom "You're not the only one 
With a gun that fires ink 
Tom looked at John in the eye 
Then he guzzled down his drink 

He said "That may be true, boy 
But I've got the fastest gun in town 
I'll fire out a few limericks
That will spin your head around" 

That's when the sheriff "Koplin" 
Walked in Soup Creek's saloon 
With pistols by his side 
He held a big bright blue balloon 

He said to Tom and John 
Let's take this duel outside 
I'll lock-up the one who shoots the other 
And give the balloon to the one who died 

Right before they walked outside 
Someone shot the balloon big bright and blue 
The fastest lady gun around 
That all the townsmen knew 

Jenna was her name 
She walked in six-inch heels 
She usually rides around Soup Creek 
On her bicycle that has three wheels 

She shot that big bright blue balloon 
As it wobbled through the air 
Then it burst with a bang and zig-zagged 
Till it landed on someone's chair 

The chair belonged to Gershon Wolfe 
The hangman of Soup Creek 
But someone shouted "He's in the out-house... 
He went to fix a leak" 

Milton, Lawless and Mike Gentile 
They were playing "Hold 'em" around the table 
While Andrea, Constance, and Tania 
Was playing "No-Peek" out in the stable 

Alexis, Eve, Heidi, Kim and Belle 
They were singing a country song 
Victor, Arlo, Vijay and Jim Slaughter 
They Joined in to sing along 

Wendy, Paula, Brenda and Jennifer 
Valsa, Sara and "Sunshine" Anne-Lise 
They were drinking shots of whiskey 
Trying to make some peace 

With Sam K, Jo and Brandy 
DebM and Anaya too! 
Because they all had their eyes on Charlie "two-stepping"
Down at the rendezvous
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Rodrigues Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 3:22 PM
Thanks, Charles! Enjoyed this rendezvous! Congratulations on POTD!
Thomas Avatar
December 27, 2022 at 1:46 PM
Oh I love this Charles! It was truly a fun read with awesome PSers!
George Avatar
December 26, 2022 at 1:41 AM
Enjoyed your poem altogether. Appreciate your efforts to include more poets into the Soup Creek city. Delighted to find my name too. Thanks a lot Charles. Congratulations on your POTD. :) :)
Nicole Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 7:31 PM
I'm smiling at you, Charles, because it is very entertaining watching you . . . "two step." I wasn't expecting to find my name within. Makes sense, I suppose, as you need some "Brandy" at the saloon. I enjoyed the carefree moments of your Soup Creek story. Congratulations my sweet friend, on Poem of Day. My best to you. :) Hugs, Brandy
Dietrich Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 6:43 PM
Ha ha. I am playing No perk. Is it a card game?? This was so nice how you included many people of soup community. Congrats on the POTD
Ray Choudhury Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 4:07 PM
Ha ha ha, Charlie! What a fun read! Congratulations on your POTD honour with a brilliant entertaining poem! Merry Christmas!
May Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 3:17 PM
Haha, Funny story Charles, Congrats on POTD
Watt Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 1:51 PM
Charlie, what a great showdown and hoedown in the Soup Creek corral. I can just see the tumbleweeds tumblin', smell the whiskey being poured, and hear the saloon piano banging out a cowboy tune. Thanks for the inclusion and congrats for your POTD acclaim!
Parker Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 12:33 PM
A poor singer without a bit of moonshine, Charlie. Thanx for the chuckles. POTD touches many on Soup Christmas Day! Arlo =;o]
Andresen Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 10:34 AM
- I'll take an extra shot of whiskey with this one, Charlie ... congratulations on yours p.o.t.d., Charlie :) - hugs
Anaya Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 10:27 AM
Congratulations on your Soup Creek POTD!!! Charlie two-stepping wouldn't miss it for the World! 'Round them cowboys and girls up, it's Christmas at Anaya's for steaks! Thank you for including me. Merry Christmas to you!
Goldsmith Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 9:49 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. Guess I just moved to Soup Creek City??? Hahaha. (Thank You for adding me.) Was it bullets or ink??? Did you read my Soup Creek??? The story lives on and on and on. Merry Christmas and have a Blessed day with your win.................
Baker Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 9:28 AM
Congratulations on your POTD, Charles. A very fun read indeed! The tales continue of Soup Creek. :-) Enjoy your honor. Bill
Fowler Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 7:40 AM
A fun story to read on Christmas Day Charlie! Congratulations on the honor of your POTD! :)
Lawless Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 7:06 AM
now that would be one uproarious Town Hall meeting
Gentile Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 6:46 AM
Terrific Charlie!! Congratulations and Merry Christmas!!
Edmonds  Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 6:30 AM
A brilliant sequence to the Soup Creek saga Charles, pleased to that I had a mention too. Congratulations on your well deserved poem of the day… Belle
Delaney Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Congratulations and Merry Christmas Charlie….Nice to see the gang all hanging out at the saloon. A fun and entertaining read. Have an absolutely wonderful day with all the children. How blessed you are. Merry Christmas. hugz~ SuZ
Pandit Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 6:08 AM
Back with BIG congrats on POTD, Charlie. Enjoy your day!
M  Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 4:45 AM
Well done Charlie on a great ,funny and clever poem and POTD…..good to see your name up in lights Ha!! Debx
Kitchin Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 3:56 AM
Charlie, back to congratulate you on POTD, enjoy the honor!
Kavanagh  Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 3:15 AM
A very apt POTD Charlie for Christmas Day, Soup Creek is a special virtual place to most folks, created for a little escapism and fun, top poem from a top guy, congratulations! cheers David
Alex Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 2:39 AM
A great amalgamation of names and talents of the soup members. Minute observation; words very carefully used; Hilarious... Wonderful work. Congratulations!
Cunningham Avatar
December 25, 2022 at 12:34 AM
The legend lives on, congratulations Charlie on the honour of POTD. Merry Christmas. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
December 24, 2022 at 12:52 PM
Charlie, a great Soup Creek segment, thank you for including me, very entertaining!
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