Gary Wayne Hill Poet Rhyme

At the Pawn Shop

Went with the wife to the pawn shop
To earn a little cash
I was in quite a hurry
Made my poor wife dash
I did a bit of haggling
But no luck, I made a groan
When they only offered me 
Ten pounds for the wife
So I had to take her home.

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Ilene Bauer July 11, 2013 at 6:57 PM ha! very clever! congrats on a well-deserved win!

Seosamh De Burca July 9, 2013 at 9:29 AM Congrats on your winning poem. funny and cheeky...well done

Connie Gildersleeve July 9, 2013 at 6:35 AM Garry I love the humor. It put laughter in my breath. I did't expect it to end this way. Congratulations on your fantastic win. Well deserved. Warm Smiles, Connie

Skat A July 9, 2013 at 12:46 AM ha I love it .... congrats all the way :-) ~SKAT~

Joyce Johnson July 8, 2013 at 8:43 PM Surprisingly funny. congratulations. Love, Joyce

Karen Croft July 8, 2013 at 8:01 PM Very funny! I guess you can try to sell or trade anything

Barbara Gorelick July 8, 2013 at 7:08 PM Funny man! congrats on your win...BG

Robert Pettit July 8, 2013 at 3:51 PM Congratulations on your win. This was very witty, Gary!

Elaine George July 8, 2013 at 3:27 PM Good one. lol.... Congrats on your win, Gary. Elaine

Poet Destroyer A July 8, 2013 at 3:10 PM Gary, a might fun theme... congratulations in the pawn shop contest...xox~ LINDA

Debbie Guzzi July 8, 2013 at 2:44 PM Congrad's on your win. Light & Love