At the Front

Like within an auditorium
with everyone speaking at once,
the cacophony grew and I knew
I shouldn't have come
into this place and space
of distant rumble where no words embrace
the heat, the dirt,
the stunning sounds that tremble.

Guns speak here.
My heart is dark and silent.
My finger twitches.
My mind collides with death
in a silent movie scene. 
Suddenly ... jarringly comes a
huge upwelling of sorrow
as your blood covers my hands.

Another day, another time
we move within a numbness
beside other human beings
bereft of speech and sound.
How was it there? they yearn to know ...
We stand and stare
as our eyes never leave the ground.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Moreno Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 3:11 AM
Sue, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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September 30, 2009 at 6:13 AM
Very moving piece, Sue. Deep and vivid images. Congratulations again and good luck in the finals with both oif your winning poems! Love, Robin
George   Avatar
September 25, 2009 at 4:33 AM
Very powerful piece, dear Sue. Best wishes through to the next round. Love Lainie
Goff Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 5:17 PM
wonderful poem! Sue! ... congrats on advancing to round two!... jim
Fraser Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 12:22 PM
Sue, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James
Brown Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 12:06 PM
Congratulations on your 2 poems making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Sue. Love, Carol
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
August 17, 2009 at 6:18 PM
Congrats Sue. Stay cool! Vince
Jordan Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 10:21 PM
Sue congrats on this poem placing in the contest - God Bless, MJ
Johnson Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 3:27 PM
A very personal rendition of the horrors of wJoycear. Congratulations on a well deserved win.
Brown Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 8:03 AM
Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Sue. Love, Carol
Lewis Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 6:07 AM
Congratulations. I enjoy reading your poems. TL
Strand Avatar
August 14, 2009 at 1:43 AM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Sue.Rgds Brian
Richards Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 6:00 PM
Sad and moving poem from you Sue, and well deserving a winning place in Debbie's contest! Congratulations!~ Carrie
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August 13, 2009 at 3:33 PM
Congratulations, Sue, on your well deserved placement in Deborah Guzzi's "War...what is it good for?" contest. Sincerely, DAS-J
Higgins Avatar
August 13, 2009 at 2:48 PM
Awesome write sista..congrats on your win.
Adeite Avatar
July 11, 2009 at 5:47 AM
Hey, I love your theme, thrust & tone.What a wonderful piece! You are such a great poet. Please keep writing & congratulations on your excellent piece being featured dis week. Great you Sue. You are one of the gifted hands here. Keep writing with your passionate pen
Moreno Avatar
July 9, 2009 at 11:46 PM
Sue, congrats on your feature...Raul
Suzadail Jr. Avatar
July 8, 2009 at 7:59 PM
Congrats Sue on the featuring of "At The Front." Tough scene. Hopefully our leaders will edit it and we can raise our eyes to the sun. Vince
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July 8, 2009 at 6:37 AM
Wow! What a powerful poem. Much for the reader to think about here. Congratulations on your well deserved featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
Richards Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 3:16 PM
Congratulations Sue...this thought provoking and well written poem, deserving this featured place this week! Congratulations!
Buys Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 1:31 PM
Congratulations on having this excellent poem featured this week. very well done. Love Heidie
Fraser Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 11:16 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem, excellent write Sue>>James
Brown Avatar
July 6, 2009 at 7:12 AM
Sue, congratulations on your featured poem this week. Very deep write. May you have many more. Love, Carol
Strand Avatar
July 5, 2009 at 11:24 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Sue.Rgds Brian
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July 5, 2009 at 10:25 PM
Hello Sue. Very nice display of talent. I enjoyed reading your poetry. Congratulations. Ernilando
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