At the Front

Like within an auditorium
with everyone speaking at once,
the cacophony grew and I knew
I shouldn't have come
into this place and space
of distant rumble where no words embrace
the heat, the dirt,
the stunning sounds that tremble.

Guns speak here.
My heart is dark and silent.
My finger twitches.
My mind collides with death
in a silent movie scene. 
Suddenly ... jarringly comes a
huge upwelling of sorrow
as your blood covers my hands.

Another day, another time
we move within a numbness
beside other human beings
bereft of speech and sound.
How was it there? they yearn to know ...
We stand and stare
as our eyes never leave the ground.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 10/9/2009 3:11:00 AM
Sue, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul
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Date: 9/30/2009 6:13:00 AM
Very moving piece, Sue. Deep and vivid images. Congratulations again and good luck in the finals with both oif your winning poems! Love, Robin
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Date: 9/25/2009 4:33:00 AM
Very powerful piece, dear Sue. Best wishes through to the next round. Love Lainie
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Date: 9/24/2009 5:17:00 PM
wonderful poem! Sue! ... congrats on advancing to round two!... jim
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:22:00 PM
Sue, congratulations in getting past round one of the competition >> James
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Date: 9/24/2009 12:06:00 PM
Congratulations on your 2 poems making it through the first round.Wishing you the best in the finals Sue. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/17/2009 6:18:00 PM
Congrats Sue. Stay cool! Vince
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Date: 8/14/2009 10:21:00 PM
Sue congrats on this poem placing in the contest - God Bless, MJ
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Date: 8/14/2009 3:27:00 PM
A very personal rendition of the horrors of wJoycear. Congratulations on a well deserved win.
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Date: 8/14/2009 8:03:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Deborah's contest Sue. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/14/2009 6:07:00 AM
Congratulations. I enjoy reading your poems. TL
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Date: 8/14/2009 1:43:00 AM
Congrats on your success in Debbie's contest Sue.Rgds Brian
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Date: 8/13/2009 6:00:00 PM
Sad and moving poem from you Sue, and well deserving a winning place in Debbie's contest! Congratulations!~ Carrie
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Date: 8/13/2009 3:33:00 PM
Congratulations, Sue, on your well deserved placement in Deborah Guzzi's "War...what is it good for?" contest. Sincerely, DAS-J
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Date: 8/13/2009 2:48:00 PM
Awesome write sista..congrats on your win.
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Date: 7/11/2009 5:47:00 AM
Hey, I love your theme, thrust & tone.What a wonderful piece! You are such a great poet. Please keep writing & congratulations on your excellent piece being featured dis week. Great you Sue. You are one of the gifted hands here. Keep writing with your passionate pen
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Date: 7/9/2009 11:46:00 PM
Sue, congrats on your feature...Raul
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Date: 7/8/2009 7:59:00 PM
Congrats Sue on the featuring of "At The Front." Tough scene. Hopefully our leaders will edit it and we can raise our eyes to the sun. Vince
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Date: 7/8/2009 6:37:00 AM
Wow! What a powerful poem. Much for the reader to think about here. Congratulations on your well deserved featured. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen
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Date: 7/6/2009 3:16:00 PM
Congratulations Sue...this thought provoking and well written poem, deserving this featured place this week! Congratulations!
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Date: 7/6/2009 1:31:00 PM
Congratulations on having this excellent poem featured this week. very well done. Love Heidie
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Date: 7/6/2009 11:16:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem, excellent write Sue>>James
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Date: 7/6/2009 7:12:00 AM
Sue, congratulations on your featured poem this week. Very deep write. May you have many more. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/5/2009 11:24:00 PM
Congrats on your feature poem this week Sue.Rgds Brian
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Date: 7/5/2009 10:25:00 PM
Hello Sue. Very nice display of talent. I enjoyed reading your poetry. Congratulations. Ernilando
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